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Tim is trying to fill Jack’s shoes Writing limericks for us to peruse He sure is a hit When he writes with wit It’s a challenge he just can’t refuse Tribute to Tim Smith who is busy writing limericks as Jack is on away for a while 13th May 2015

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James Fraser

Date: 5/29/2015 4:49:00 PM

Good old Tim, please make them more naughtier man, hehe! - hugs, James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2015 4:54:00 PM

I don't need encouraging to make my limericks naughtier and Tim is catching up fast lol :-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 5/15/2015 10:58:00 AM

You are tackling limericks with confidence, Jan. Keep the humour coming:) hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 5/15/2015 11:31:00 AM

I promise I will always try Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv

Date: 5/15/2015 9:30:00 AM

This is fantastic!! You three are few of the BEST at limericks!! :D :D

Jan Allison
Date: 5/15/2015 11:30:00 AM

Aww Sneha that is so kind - I just trying to bring a smile to people's faces:-) Hugs Jan xx

Peter Dome

Date: 5/14/2015 3:36:00 AM

Love Tims poems, he is so good. love yours too, word perfect and so clever. well done. best wishes. Pete. 7.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2015 6:03:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Peter:-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2015 9:34:00 PM

great tribute for the Tim mister!!! Keep em coming, my friend.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2015 1:48:00 AM

Thanks Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/13/2015 7:55:00 PM

G'day Jan... and Tim's doing a bloody good job at it to. Young Jack might have to lift his game. A well written limerick Jan - thank you - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 5/14/2015 1:47:00 AM

Thanks so much Lindsay:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/13/2015 1:50:00 PM

- Limerick is difficult ...... I am impressed by Tim :) - You have been expert in Limerick poems, dear Jan - I can not do it! - However, I have a beautiful new co-write posted today :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/13/2015 2:19:00 PM

ooh will pop by Anne Lise:-) Hugs Jan xx

Trenton Moore

Date: 5/13/2015 12:34:00 PM

Witty!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/13/2015 12:35:00 PM

Thanks Trenton:-) Hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/13/2015 9:54:00 AM

Tim is definitely trying... Oh he`s keeping Jack`s girls coming....Coming back for more....till jack`s at the door... Then to him they go back flying B-).Just teasing Tim.He is really doing a great lomerick job and so are you sweet Jan .Timothu im joking ,so dont get mad at me : )

Tim Smith
Date: 5/13/2015 9:57:00 AM

: )

Jan Allison
Date: 5/13/2015 9:56:00 AM

LOL Charma - I had to honour Tim he is working so hard at making us laugh with his limericks:-) Hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 5/13/2015 9:21:00 AM

How delightful your Limerick is. Hopefully Jack has not yet filled his shoes with Shells and Sand!.....OUCH

Jan Allison
Date: 5/13/2015 9:49:00 AM

Jack was last seen heading for the beach with his bucket and spade! Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 5/13/2015 8:51:00 AM

Awww....thanks Jan.....I just got out of work....thinking up one for today : )

Tim Smith
Date: 5/13/2015 9:02:00 AM

Haha....I just put one up....

Jan Allison
Date: 5/13/2015 8:59:00 AM

I wrote the two today in a spare 5 mins at work today before the exam started - then I had to have my beady eyes on the students:-) Hugs Jan xx