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Tim Is Trying

Tim is trying to fill Jack’s shoes
Writing limericks for us to peruse
He sure is a hit
When he writes with wit
It’s a challenge he just can’t refuse

Tribute to Tim Smith who is busy writing limericks as Jack is on away for a while

13th May 2015

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James Fraser May 29, 2015 at 4:49 PM Good old Tim, please make them more naughtier man, hehe! - hugs, James xx Jan Allison May 29, 2015 at 4:54 PM I don't need encouraging to make my limericks naughtier and Tim is catching up fast lol :-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus May 15, 2015 at 10:58 AM You are tackling limericks with confidence, Jan. Keep the humour coming:) hugs // paul Jan Allison May 15, 2015 at 11:31 AM I promise I will always try Paul:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv May 15, 2015 at 9:30 AM This is fantastic!! You three are few of the BEST at limericks!! :D :D Jan Allison May 15, 2015 at 11:30 AM Aww Sneha that is so kind - I just trying to bring a smile to people's faces:-) Hugs Jan xx

Peter Dome May 14, 2015 at 3:36 AM Love Tims poems, he is so good. love yours too, word perfect and so clever. well done. best wishes. Pete. 7. Jan Allison May 14, 2015 at 6:03 AM Thanks for the lovely comment Peter:-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich May 13, 2015 at 9:34 PM great tribute for the Tim mister!!! Keep em coming, my friend. Jan Allison May 14, 2015 at 1:48 AM Thanks Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie May 13, 2015 at 7:55 PM G'day Jan... and Tim's doing a bloody good job at it to. Young Jack might have to lift his game. A well written limerick Jan - thank you - Lindsay Jan Allison May 14, 2015 at 1:47 AM Thanks so much Lindsay:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen May 13, 2015 at 1:50 PM - Limerick is difficult ...... I am impressed by Tim :) - You have been expert in Limerick poems, dear Jan - I can not do it! - However, I have a beautiful new co-write posted today :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison May 13, 2015 at 2:19 PM ooh will pop by Anne Lise:-) Hugs Jan xx

Trenton Moore May 13, 2015 at 12:34 PM Witty! Jan Allison May 13, 2015 at 12:35 PM Thanks Trenton:-) Hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop May 13, 2015 at 9:54 AM Tim is definitely trying... Oh he`s keeping Jack`s girls coming....Coming back for more....till jack`s at the door... Then to him they go back flying B-).Just teasing Tim.He is really doing a great lomerick job and so are you sweet Jan .Timothu im joking ,so dont get mad at me : ) Tim Smith May 13, 2015 at 9:57 AM : ) Jan Allison May 13, 2015 at 9:56 AM LOL Charma - I had to honour Tim he is working so hard at making us laugh with his limericks:-) Hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos May 13, 2015 at 9:21 AM How delightful your Limerick is. Hopefully Jack has not yet filled his shoes with Shells and Sand!.....OUCH Jan Allison May 13, 2015 at 9:49 AM Jack was last seen heading for the beach with his bucket and spade! Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith May 13, 2015 at 8:51 AM Awww....thanks Jan.....I just got out of work....thinking up one for today : ) Tim Smith May 13, 2015 at 9:02 AM Haha....I just put one up.... Jan Allison May 13, 2015 at 8:59 AM I wrote the two today in a spare 5 mins at work today before the exam started - then I had to have my beady eyes on the students:-) Hugs Jan xx