Tim

There once was a witty "tot", Tim, 
His "radar" detected all the slim. 
With "level" of glee, 
He'd "deified" spree, 
"Level" elated, Thats Tim's whim!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2024 at 10:31 PM
Congrats, Jay. I see that word level was a popular one used in many of these limericks
May Avatar
June 1, 2024 at 6:28 AM
Congrats on your win Very nicely done
One Avatar
May 12, 2024 at 5:37 AM
Nice one
Rodgers Avatar
May 10, 2024 at 6:38 AM
Hello Jay, your Tim limerick is so clever! The wordplay creates a fun, whimsical feel. But it also leaves me curious about Tim's character. The poem sparks the imagination, making me wonder more about Tim's world. - Blessings, Daniel
George Avatar
May 9, 2024 at 9:30 PM
A great entry for the contest..... With Palindrome, it is not that easy to write a witty limerick, but you have succeeded. All the Best dear Jay Ji
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