Tilting Galaxies

read you in a dewy meadow of cataclysmic ambrosia

damp feathers of grass tickling the nape of my neck,

 my eyes could sense seclusion's blossomed temptation

  'pon surmised landscapes of poetic otherworldly sublimity, 

insomuch as sonata's perceptive celestial bodies' played on

    imposing horizons and seascapes indistinguishable as

snowflakes midst commanding symphonic overtures, 

   meanwhilst stardust & moons simultaneously tilt galaxies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 6, 2016 at 9:37 PM
Nice! Happy you commented on my poem so I could find you. I feel we may have a common ground yet mine is patched by simplistic ways and yours is worded up like fatalistic blaze...Either way, we could benefit from one another...creeper stalker status out—;) enjoy your day.
Wolf Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 12:50 AM
You write with such pizzazz! Love it.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 2:14 PM
What happened to the poem, Paloma. Sigh. I bet it was a beautiful write though. Love you, lady. RW
Raynes Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 8:45 PM
loved this write Paloma, I got lost in it.
White Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 1:58 AM
PALOMA, that first line is gorgeous. Wish it was mine :)
Goff Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 8:02 PM
A glorious ride! Paloma! Congrats! jimbo
Devers Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 9:11 AM
An intriguing, dreamlike poem that transports the reader from the sensual - grass tickling the neck - to the mystical, and from a meadow to a universe. Good stuff
Smith Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 8:47 AM
Loved the snowflakes line. Well done Paloma...
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