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Tilting Galaxies

read you in a dewy meadow of cataclysmic ambrosia damp feathers of grass tickling the nape of my neck, my eyes could sense seclusion's blossomed temptation 'pon surmised landscapes of poetic otherworldly sublimity, insomuch as sonata's perceptive celestial bodies' played on imposing horizons and seascapes indistinguishable as snowflakes midst commanding symphonic overtures, meanwhilst stardust & moons simultaneously tilt galaxies

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Date: 12/6/2016 9:37:00 PM
Nice! Happy you commented on my poem so I could find you. I feel we may have a common ground yet mine is patched by simplistic ways and yours is worded up like fatalistic blaze...Either way, we could benefit from one another...creeper stalker status out—;) enjoy your day.
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Date: 11/16/2016 12:50:00 AM
You write with such pizzazz! Love it.
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Date: 11/8/2016 2:14:00 PM
What happened to the poem, Paloma. Sigh. I bet it was a beautiful write though. Love you, lady. RW
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Date: 11/6/2016 8:45:00 PM
loved this write Paloma, I got lost in it.
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Date: 11/6/2016 1:58:00 AM
PALOMA, that first line is gorgeous. Wish it was mine :)
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Date: 11/5/2016 8:02:00 PM
A glorious ride! Paloma! Congrats! jimbo
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Date: 11/5/2016 9:11:00 AM
An intriguing, dreamlike poem that transports the reader from the sensual - grass tickling the neck - to the mystical, and from a meadow to a universe. Good stuff
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Date: 11/5/2016 8:47:00 AM
Loved the snowflakes line. Well done Paloma...
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