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Till My Last Breath

I watched as the pages of my life blurred into one, helplesss as a child, I watched them burn. The life I had so meticulously built... so meticulously, well in my head at least, as it crumbled and tumbled around me. I felt the pang of sorrow and guilt, as I assessed the damage I'd done to me, damage that could never be repaired. And yet, with the hope of rising anew, as a pheonix from it's ashes, I continue with this dreary exixtance. As a new day dawns, so do I...prepared to fight... fight till my last breath.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/14/2014 6:59:00 PM
Rise like the Phoenix Well done! grats on your win :)
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Angie Thomas
Date: 8/22/2014 9:48:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments :)
Date: 8/14/2014 8:36:00 AM
This one I like. Got to fight till the end of the day! Got to fight and keep coming back like the phoenix!!
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Date: 8/14/2014 8:05:00 AM
Wonderful write Angie! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/13/2014 5:33:00 PM
Bravo, Angie!
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Date: 8/13/2014 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations on this fine win, Angie
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