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Congratulations - wow, another great ending line!

Congratulations. One of the best entries I read

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Hiya, this brings a smile as I read and fathom what the possibilities are. Nothing like happy anticipation. We all hope the reality and the dream can merge as one. Take Care!!

Oh Hiya, I’m grasping for words to describe this literary tour-de-force from your gifted platinum pen. Suffice to say I am bewitched by it all. Exquisite metaphors and alliterations infused. I worship each line but my personal favourite is the “my muse….. twin flame mo on …🔥🔥🔥🔥 Good luck in contest. Your appreciation of MOON I really value and cherish. Warmth and care Howard

Creative contest entry that reads like a good contender to me, Hiya. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K. 👏✍️

This is beautiful to read today. Well written :)

Your fantastic poem evokes a sense of ethereal beauty and emotional depth, intertwining themes of love and nature with striking imagery, dear Hiya. The use of metaphor and symbolism in phrases like "sun smoke" and "twin-flame moon" creates a mystical atmosphere. Its concise yet profound expressions invite readers to explore the layers of emotion beneath the words. Despite its brevity, the poem leaves a lasting impression through its harmonious blend of language and sentiment.

Fabulous, Hiya and a fave. This has got to place high!!

Combining a lovely image with thoughts breathing passion, you have created an enthralling poem, dear Hiya. 'This unwedded rose breathes love'. Such a striking metaphor! A fav.👍

just beautiful, Hiya <3

Dear Hiya, What I like most is how you let the feeling speak without pushing it. The lines a small confession, one you don’t announce so much as breathe. It may be brief, but it lands with that sense of meeting someone who shifts the light around you. Amen! Blessings, Daniel

Dear Hiya, this is beautifully written!❤️😍 Best of luck for the contest 😊☺️ Best, Anne

- Beautiful and tender, Hiya :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Beautifully poetic!

Beautifully romantic Hiya, you conveyed so much in a short verse. Best of luck in the contest. Tom 🌹

I love this. You have created such beautiful imagery in this dodoitsu.❤️

Pleasure reading this one ~ definitely a fave! Sending you mermaid moonbeams today and always ~ 🧜‍♀️ 🌙 🧚 🧜‍♀️ 🌙 🧚 🏝️ 🌊 ☀️ 🌹

I absolutely love everything about this soulful star of my soul, the picture youv picked for it, the arrangement of lines and the way youv worded your thoughts, in the form of dodoitsu, is just so very stunning and magical! I loveee " O sun smoke" and also "this unwedded rose weeps love" wow! How evocative and deeply moving. How youv described the phases of feelings from the beginning till the end, and how soulmate blooms in your life, inspires your muse is beyond stunning! A very unique take