Till Death Do Us Part

Your teeth mutilate my flesh
My sinews, my muscles rotting
As you cry, “I am your master!”
As I reply, “I am your life!”

You eat me daily when you are weak
And leave me waiting when you are strong
I neither belong to you,
Nor am I separate from you

You carry me along your journeys
Like a heavy dream on your mind
And I wait for the night to come
To remind you,
Your nightmares are me
And you—fresh and scorching

From the moment you bit into me
I became all your malnourishment
And this I will always remind you:
That I am still woefully here
That I am painfully alive
And in and out of this path you tread,
Till the day you die,
You will always be mine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/27/2018 11:03:00 AM
My Dear Laura, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit.So very good to read YOU again. "Till the day you die, You will always be mine" And then YOUR SOUL will be free to walk the Path of Life. Superb Pen LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG
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Date: 11/15/2017 1:28:00 AM
I really enjoyed the flow and rhythm of this poem. Very interesting and makes you think. Especially powerful ending. You've recently been visiting my page and leaving nice comments, so Ithought I'd visit yours. :) Love ~Grace
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 11/15/2017 10:09:00 PM
Thanks for the sweet visit, Grace. I'm loving your page and will be back to read more really soon. <3~Laura
Date: 11/14/2017 3:20:00 PM
Sounds very much like depression Laura, or a really disturbed relationship. A deep write.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 11/14/2017 9:05:00 PM
This is an extremely metaphorical poem, and I love to see what other people think of it! My focus was on the destruction of the self through our actions. It is indeed a disturbed relationship - sin personified, relating to us! Always glad for your visits. Thank you. <3~Laura
Date: 11/10/2017 5:54:00 AM
Very powerful, the punch line, a killer! :)
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 11/10/2017 8:12:00 PM
Thanks, Mick. I appreciate your visits and your kindness. <3~Laura
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