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Tight ( I Think It's Haiku, Correct If I'M Wrong )

if only you could hold me as tight as a nail fastens wood to wall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/26/2009 5:39:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I am hoping to see many more poems here written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2009 7:01:00 PM
James is right Chole, I like the originality of your thoughts-AA
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Date: 5/21/2009 5:20:00 PM
haiku's are usually about nature. senryu's are generally about life. im guessing this would be a senryu because its about someone. ....besides all that though this is a very great write. love the last line.-love and peace:james
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