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Tiger

Transient languor ends as tantalizing faint scent transfixes Baghinder. Taut muscles, hair on end; tangible now, the prey. Tearing, screaming, death; the timeless circle of life. In Search Of Prey Poetry Contest, placed 3rd Sponsored by: Joseph May Date wrote: 19th March 2022

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Date: 4/3/2022 4:22:00 AM
You amazingly described this beautiful animal in your pleiades my dear friend. I like it very much. Congratulations on your win and this superb write! Thanks for sharing!
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/3/2022 8:18:00 AM
Thank you, Len, for your kind comments, have a great day, my friend. Terry.
Date: 4/2/2022 8:27:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Terry. Vivid description of the circle of life for us through your poetry. Bill
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/3/2022 2:10:00 AM
Thank you, Bill, I appreciate your comments a lot.
Date: 4/1/2022 10:21:00 PM
Congratulations Terry "tangible now, the prey. Tearing, screaming, death" This would have been enough to win.
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/2/2022 6:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Caren.
Date: 4/1/2022 10:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful animal. A wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away................
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/2/2022 6:16:00 AM
Thank you Paula
Date: 3/31/2022 10:08:00 AM
I really like this Baghinder write! :)
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/2/2022 6:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan
Date: 3/31/2022 6:06:00 AM
Both of us chose tiger and both of us have won ! Congratulations Terry !
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/2/2022 6:17:00 AM
We did, thank you Valsa
Date: 3/30/2022 7:36:00 PM
Tiger, indeed, is a wonder. You have brought it out beautifully. Congratulations!
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Terry Miller
Date: 3/31/2022 2:25:00 AM
Thank you so much; I always appreciate your comments.
Date: 3/30/2022 6:13:00 PM
Very nicely crafted, Terry. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Kindest regards dear.
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Terry Miller
Date: 3/31/2022 2:26:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments which I truly appreciate.
Date: 3/30/2022 4:41:00 PM
Great description, Terry, don't want to be around one when it's hungry. Congratulations on your win. Blessings my friend with inspiration that flows forever
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Terry Miller
Date: 3/31/2022 2:57:00 AM
Thank you, Eve, I always appreciate your kind comments.
Date: 3/30/2022 3:07:00 PM
Terry I gotta say three of my favorites are on the bottom and yours is one of them. Love this. Congrats.
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Terry Miller
Date: 3/31/2022 2:57:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I loved your snappy entry.
Date: 3/30/2022 2:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win Terry, Very nicely penned
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Terry Miller
Date: 3/31/2022 2:58:00 AM
Thank you, Joseph, for your kind comments.
Date: 3/28/2022 5:22:00 AM
This is wonderful ! Well delineated the sudden change that comes over the predator, the moment it spots a prey ! All the best in the contest Terry.....
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Terry Miller
Date: 3/31/2022 2:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Valsa I do appreciate your kind comments.
Date: 3/22/2022 9:40:00 PM
wow, very well done, Terry. tiger was a good choice here!!
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Terry Miller
Date: 3/23/2022 8:55:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea, I did not find this form an easy write
Date: 3/22/2022 6:18:00 PM
I think I'm gonna be a square. Gotta stay out of 'that timeless circle,' I say. :) gw
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Terry Miller
Date: 3/23/2022 8:57:00 AM
Could have used a triangle of course and called it Triger
Date: 3/21/2022 5:52:00 AM
Terry, I've not known of this form previously and your poem intrigues me! Terrifically frightening images it has created for me! Good luck!
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Terry Miller
Date: 3/23/2022 8:58:00 AM
Hi Mike, I found this form difficult to get a good rhythm, but thank you for your comments. Have a good one.

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