Tied To the Train Tacks

Tell me that you think I'm Special, While I'm hog-tied to the trestles As I await the train to crush my pain- Too many Demons have I wrestled!

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Robin Davis

Date: 12/20/2013 5:03:00 PM

Chan The Man I will hold the demons back from you and stop the pain. No need to get crushed by a train or pinned down by the evil doers. LOL Thanks for another insightful and honest comment on my Mistakes poem. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 12/21/2013 8:02:00 AM

This piece isn't very good and is mostly unfinished, I think. It needs to be revised, but thanks for popping by :)

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/29/2013 3:53:00 PM

Your poem here is wonderful though I'd wish that it never had end so soon. Fantastic write from a lovely heart.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/30/2013 8:38:00 AM

Should say ** "One of the many reasons" lol Sometimes I think a word but neglect to type it ;)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/30/2013 8:36:00 AM

This is one of the reason I love you, my dear Mustapha. You always offer me the constructive criticism that I NEED and very much want. I see your point; it DOES feel unfinished. I shall have to come back to this one in the future and see where else I can take it. Thanks so much for the compliments and critique; you don't know how much it helps me :)