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7/24/2026 for Tie Dye in July Poetry Contest sponsored by Anthony Bianco 

Tie Dye in July

It was the summer of love. I was eight -
south in the California state 
with discipline, the War, and hate.
I wore a button down shirt 
and hard black shoes that always hurt, 
but in my heart, no one could deny
a tie dye in July. 

Ten years later, I was released
to freedom, love, and peace.
made of real cotton, not of fleece. 
A rainbow appeared, my mind was split.
I took a California sunshine hit  
at Venice Beach, eight miles high,
wearing tie dye in July. 

On time's pedal, someone hit the gas -
ten years gone, not all things last.  
George once said, "all things must pass",
so, at a corporate conference
a cool free shirt and pretence -
something was awry
as I wore tie dye in July.

As we two, in a poem's words unite,
I'll tell you my best memories, tonight.
They were rainbow colors, ever bright;
and, whatever it all meant,
when, to Heaven, I am sent, 
I hope that I will fly
wearing tie dye in July.
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August 18, 2026 at 12:06 AM
The poem's flow is seamless, and the use of personification gives depth to the portrayal of summer. It's a delight to read; congratulations on your contest win, David.
Crandall Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 6:37 AM
Thanks, Sotto!
Wolf Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 9:22 PM
I just love this write, David. Feel as I've met the 'real you' in it. Really. ~ Gershon
Crandall Avatar
July 26, 2026 at 12:32 PM
Thanks, Gershon - glad you liked it! Yep, I think I managed to put a good piece of myself in this one.
Kendrick Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 4:49 AM
Creative contest entry, David. It reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K.
Crandall Avatar
July 26, 2026 at 12:19 PM
Thanks, Sara!
Smith  Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 11:58 PM
Tie-dye in July really does create some great memories for you.
Crandall Avatar
July 26, 2026 at 12:17 PM
Yup, thanks, Alison!
Jones Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 10:10 PM
David this was like a ride very enjoyable! I like “ A rainbow appeared, my mind was split. I took a California sunshine hit at Venice Beach, eight miles high, wearing tie dye in July. ” Best wishes for the contest!
Crandall Avatar
July 26, 2026 at 12:17 PM
Thanks, Karen!
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