Tides of War - One Nine and Sixteen Contest

The sewing machine, long idle, gathered dust
Under the circling motes, bright in the sunlight.
This house ravaged by war left to its self,
The family, unhappily, were all killed in the last raid.

This happy home where love abounded
Mother and children faced the trying time alone.
Man of the house had been away fighting,
A photograph still swung drunkenly on the wall.

The war years seemed like only yesterday
The town has so many pieces to pick up.
Many houses, empty just like this one
Needed to house the growing homeless.

These are for people lost all in the war,
So carrying a lit candle each room was inspected.
Boxes were ticked on the form carried...job complete,
The candle sputtered, spent, and all was dark.

Penned 13/4/2018

Contest...one, nine and sixteen...Viv Wigley
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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George   Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 9:10 PM
A great take on this challenge, Siren. Many congrats on your win. Sincerely, Elaine
Johnson Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 3:27 PM
I am surprised how everyone came up with so many scenarios. Congratulations.
Allison Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 12:04 PM
Such sad imagery Seren and unfortunately this scene must have been witnessed many times during times of conflict:-( Many congratulations on your win in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Gentry Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 10:37 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done.
Gauthier Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 7:09 AM
Back with congrats on your fine win, Seren.
Onclaud Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 6:29 PM
seren, how deep is this poem!... i have not seen the contest page though your poem was much enjoyed!..huggs
Gauthier Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 10:35 PM
Lovely poem. Well depicted, Seren.
Roberts Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 12:16 AM
thank you Line...Seren
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