Tickles and Pickles In Eve's Den

He's given me a pickle
with nary any tickle!
As in the shade I stood
[He wasn't very good!]

The apple that I shared
he gave to me unpared.
So I gave his snake a shake
to make him see the stakes.

Then the sky went BOOM
G-d came into the room.
I told you I said, "NO!
Now really, you must GO!"

Eve'n a dame could see
Eve's den wasn't free.

So menes mind your pickles
don't forget your Evies tickles
Or your snake will go unshaked
and you'll get punished

for Goodness SAKE!

Hey when was sake invented?

Dedicated to the Rube Syd Beck read [Let My beetles Go!]
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ryerson Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 2:12 PM
WELL, he certainly did deserve to get his snaked shaked and it was VERY inconsiderate of him to tickle your pickle. MEN!...Dis be veddy nize, sha. Love to you my good friend - Tim
Richards Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 5:29 PM
LOL !!!! LOve it!!!
Caulfield Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 6:14 PM
This a cute one.
The Drunken Poet Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 10:25 AM
LOL..GREAT WRITE HAHAHA!!!!
Merryman Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 7:40 PM
So funny! Good one, Debbie! Love, Kim
O'Leary Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 7:27 PM
Very naughty... somewhat knotty... Not Terry (no, not he)
A   Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 6:19 PM
DG., I like this, we women are really something..thank you for the smile... thanks for sharing your poem, always~PD
Grisetti Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 5:54 PM
Very clever. At first it reminded me of Arlo Guthrie singing the motorcycle song.
Williams Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 12:08 PM
ha, Debbie really good...David
Andresen Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 11:35 AM
....lol.....funny - good one Debbie....like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 11:27 AM
Still laughing, Debbie! You are too clever!! SOUPMAIL...
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 11:11 AM
Love it and still laughing xx
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