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Tickles and Pickles In Eve's Den

He's given me a pickle with nary any tickle! As in the shade I stood [He wasn't very good!] The apple that I shared he gave to me unpared. So I gave his snake a shake to make him see the stakes. Then the sky went BOOM G-d came into the room. I told you I said, "NO! Now really, you must GO!" Eve'n a dame could see Eve's den wasn't free. So menes mind your pickles don't forget your Evies tickles Or your snake will go unshaked and you'll get punished for Goodness SAKE! Hey when was sake invented? Dedicated to the Rube Syd Beck read [Let My beetles Go!]

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/28/2012 2:12:00 PM
WELL, he certainly did deserve to get his snaked shaked and it was VERY inconsiderate of him to tickle your pickle. MEN!...Dis be veddy nize, sha. Love to you my good friend - Tim
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Date: 6/26/2012 5:29:00 PM
LOL !!!! LOve it!!!
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Date: 6/25/2012 6:14:00 PM
This a cute one.
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Date: 6/25/2012 10:25:00 AM
LOL..GREAT WRITE HAHAHA!!!!
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Date: 6/24/2012 7:40:00 PM
So funny! Good one, Debbie! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/24/2012 7:27:00 PM
Very naughty... somewhat knotty... Not Terry (no, not he)
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Date: 6/24/2012 6:19:00 PM
DG., I like this, we women are really something..thank you for the smile... thanks for sharing your poem, always~PD
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Date: 6/24/2012 5:54:00 PM
Very clever. At first it reminded me of Arlo Guthrie singing the motorcycle song.
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Date: 6/24/2012 12:08:00 PM
ha, Debbie really good...David
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Date: 6/24/2012 11:35:00 AM
....lol.....funny - good one Debbie....like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/24/2012 11:27:00 AM
Still laughing, Debbie! You are too clever!! SOUPMAIL...
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Date: 6/24/2012 11:11:00 AM
Love it and still laughing xx
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