Tickles and Pickles

There was a girl who loved salty pickles
She'd stick in a fork for a sure tickle
The first bite would spirt
She'd give the dork a squirt
Pickle juice in the eyes, such a giggle!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 17, 2010 at 10:37 AM
Doris, Very late on my congratulations,, Shame on em.. better late than never. Had fun reading all entries.. CONGRATULTIONS once again... always,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 9:07 PM
very cute one, Doris. Congratulations!
Fraser Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 1:33 PM
Congratulations Doris on your fine win in pd's contest >> James :)
Brown Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 10:20 AM
Congratulations on your win Doris in P D's contest "Pickles & Tickles *Limerick*". Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
November 15, 2010 at 9:18 AM
Very good one Doris, humorous! Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses
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November 15, 2010 at 7:35 AM
This is so true, Doris. I have to be sure to get the small pickles so the entire thing gets in before I have juice in my eyes. Great write. Congrats on your win. Dan C
Mannan Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 8:53 PM
Hahaha. Lovely one Doris. Many congratulations for this win.
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November 14, 2010 at 11:31 AM
sixth place win...eureka!!
Sweetheart Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 7:56 AM
Congrats Doris on your big win in P.D.'s contest with this wonderful and terrific write for your Limerick entry... enjoy sweet victory this happy Sunday with lots of luv my friend.. hope all is well...and happy..too..
Kendrick Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 6:26 AM
Congrats.Mom
Mehta Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 4:42 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Doris
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October 24, 2010 at 7:38 AM
That must have hurt her, Doris! Cute Limerick, enjoyed the read this afternoon! You should have tasted my cheesetart with whipped cream and cranberries and a baked dough (not a crumbled one and with curd not with philadelphia fresh cheese). When living in Papua Newu Guinea we also prepared the one which is not baked but kept in the fridge. So the one I prepared for my guests would have even tasted you!...Have a great week!...Gert
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October 21, 2010 at 10:30 AM
Ouch that sour pickle would sting the eye. Cute one Doris. God Bless Phyl
Kendrick Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 7:31 AM
Cute Limerick..May you win first place with this one..Mom
Mehta Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 7:17 AM
Wonderful write and a winning entry for the contest, Doris
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October 21, 2010 at 7:13 AM
Ouch, that juice had to burn, Doris. Very cute limerick. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 7:04 AM
cute and funny today Doris.. good luck in the contest... but u must change your title to reflect the contest name of Pickles and Tickles luv or be disqualified according to blog rules by sponsor.. a great way to begin my laundry day...
Brahma Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 6:36 AM
enjoyed your poem.
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