Tickle Trout

In the cool of the evening he laid there basking 
as my fingers touched the gleaming surface of the pool.
Deeper i penetrated till my hand was beneath him,
slowly my fingers engaged his slithery belly,
then gently with a slight single movement
to and thro, then up and down 
his whole body fully relaxed as he rolled a little
to accommodate me.
As he laid there his eye and my eyes connected
each of us wondering no doubt what the next move would be,
while carefully not to let my nose which was just above the surface
play any part in this my devious quest.
Suddenly a water skater bug came floating by
and decided to explore my nostril,
at this point making me sneeze, the force of the blast
sending the bug careering upon the surface.
In a flash swallowed by my impending supper
who then scurried away to the safety
of the rocky bed of the creek,
to become King Trout for another day.

  © Harry J Horsman 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Ashley Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 1:57 PM
Ah, dear Harry, the enchanting intimate nature of your beautiful narrative brings me to the center of the scene as I experience every amazing moment with you. Your poetic finesse shines in this gem.. great title too. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
La France Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 10:04 AM
Harry, a wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in the contest, blessings ~
George Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 1:26 AM
Sweet poem . Sorry, the blissful moment was interrupted by the sudden intrusion of a trout. Love the way you have ended your poem. Hearty Congratulations, harry on your prestgious win.
Toney Avatar
September 11, 2022 at 8:38 PM
Harry, what a delight to read! Your title is brilliant. I love the way you worked that water skater bug into the action! A Fav for me. Congratulations on your win on Mile 13 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 14 has already started!
Alex Avatar
September 11, 2022 at 8:29 PM
Congratulations, again!
Bowden Avatar
January 29, 2022 at 4:41 AM
Can’t win ‘em all. Sometimes the fishing gods don’t bless us. Lovely verse.
Alex Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 12:38 AM
Wow! Great description. Congratulations!
Raven Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 10:49 AM
Hi Harry, dropping by with my congratulations on your much deserved win in the contest. Have a wonderful monday. Your friend always....Mike.
Wheatley Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 2:05 PM
Congratulations!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 1:20 PM
Have to say it, I am happy he got away. But kudos to you for trying to catch him that humane way! I loved this fish story Harry! Congratulations on your top win! : )
Kendrick Avatar
December 18, 2012 at 12:53 PM
Congrats on your work being in the winners' line-up..Great job....Sara
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 11:11 AM
so glad to see t his one won in the contest after just having seen it recently! having FOUND it, i should say. I also used an oldie for my entry. though it was a fisherwoman and not a man. haha. It was all I had on the topic.
Liwayway Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 7:54 AM
Congratulations friend Harry on your awesome win. Cheers!!! (^_^)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 2:06 AM
H a, you could tickle my belly and see if i run lol. Congratulations on your winning spot harry
Roberts Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 10:41 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Harry......Seren
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 10:17 PM
wow, this one is outstanding. Just a simple thing like watching a fish and almost having it in your grasp except for the water skater bug. Top notch, Harry. I love this kind of story poem!!
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 10:16 PM
oh goodie, I have found one!!! Let me read it now!
Wesley Avatar
September 7, 2011 at 8:20 PM
Great story Harry, love how you create stilnees then break it up with a sneeze. Clever.
Brumley Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 5:23 PM
I wonder how many times this scene has been repeated down through history, perhaps without the sneeze, maybe more times than a hungry belly would like to think! An excellent rendition Harry! The trout would most likely approve I'm sure. Of course I like the one where I eat him!:)
Culverhouse Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 6:27 AM
congratulations!! I like it.....thanks for noticing my silliness...I try to bring a smile since I see so much sadness in alot of the poems. We all have had heartaches--bring on the sunshine.
Brown Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 5:26 AM
Congratulations on your win Harry for the contest "The one that got away" sponsored by Thvia. Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
April 3, 2011 at 11:18 AM
Awesome write Harry, really enjoyed this one.. I see congratulations are also in order ;) love Wilma
Devonshire Avatar
April 3, 2011 at 11:16 AM
What a gret story behind your poem, Harry! At least the trout had dinner. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Guzzi Avatar
April 2, 2011 at 2:06 PM
Ahhhhh HARRY! This was wonderful, just wonderful, such a vivid write a 7 and a #1 to me and a fav so very UNIQUe a take on the topic!!!!Congrad's Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
April 2, 2011 at 12:47 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..Interesting eye contact...Very creative work..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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