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Tick Tock - Epigram

So you want a couplet - two lines that rhyme
   
Sorry, Silent One - that takes too much time





November 22nd, 2015
Epigram Couplet Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One

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Michael Tor

November 26, 2015 at 5:30 AM

LOL great win Lin!

Kim Merryman

November 25, 2015 at 11:49 PM

Ha! Ha! This is good, Lin! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Lin Lane

November 26, 2015 at 2:18 AM

Thanks, Kim. It's what popped into my mind so I went with it.

Skat A

November 24, 2015 at 6:04 PM

Lin, Congratulations on your awesome and sweet Epigram couplet win. Have yourself a wonderful, blessed Thanksgiving Day. Love SKAT

Lin Lane

November 24, 2015 at 6:26 PM

Thanks. skat.

Connie Marcum Wong

November 24, 2015 at 4:53 PM

Very amusing Lin! Congratulations on your wonderful win!

Lin Lane

November 24, 2015 at 4:56 PM

Thanks, Connie.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

November 24, 2015 at 4:16 PM

Congratulations Lin

Lin Lane

November 24, 2015 at 4:23 PM

Thanks a lot, Nayda.

Beautiful Scars

November 24, 2015 at 12:39 PM

AHA! love this! Congrats Lin! Well deserved win :) -lu *smiles*

Lin Lane

November 24, 2015 at 12:43 PM

Thanks, Laura. It was fun to write.

Paul Callus

November 24, 2015 at 11:55 AM

Unique and funny! You were quick on the draw:) Congrats on a lovely win. // paul

Lin Lane

November 24, 2015 at 12:11 PM

Thanks, Paul. Sometimes I thought hits you on the side of the head, and this was one of those times.

Alexis Y.

November 24, 2015 at 10:10 AM

Lin, so funny! Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Lin Lane

November 24, 2015 at 10:13 AM

Thanks a lot, Alexis. :)

Rizwana Bhurani

November 24, 2015 at 10:05 AM

He he....a brilliant one....superb presence of mind..congrats

Lin Lane

November 24, 2015 at 10:13 AM

Thanks, Rizwana. It's either presence of mind or insanity. lol

Andrea Dietrich

November 24, 2015 at 9:22 AM

this one was one of my very favorites. BIG congrats on your win . I have too many comments to catch up on so I am just trying to see short poems before my trip. Happy thanksgiving to you!

Lin Lane

November 24, 2015 at 9:32 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Have a safe trip!

Eve Roper

November 24, 2015 at 9:13 AM

Back again, Haha.... Love this! Congratulation on your win!

Lin Lane

November 24, 2015 at 9:17 AM

And you did equally well, Eve...Congratulations to you.

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 23, 2015 at 8:51 AM

When Silent One/ Asks you something to do/ You have to comply, my dear/ You not allowed to boo! Ha-ha! Good luck dear Lin!

Lin Lane

November 23, 2015 at 8:54 AM

oh but, Demetrios... I DID comply. I wrote an epigram couplet, personalized just for him..;)

Charmaine Chircop

November 23, 2015 at 12:46 AM

: ) Big smiles...Love this.

Lin Lane

November 23, 2015 at 2:50 PM

Thanks, Charmaine, for the compliment and the smile.

Tim Smith

November 22, 2015 at 7:37 PM

Very cute Lin....made me smile

Lin Lane

November 22, 2015 at 9:06 PM

Thanks a bunch, Tim.

Cherl Dunn

November 22, 2015 at 6:02 PM

Dear Lin Lane Yes a great entry for the contest, short and very sweet dearest lady, enjoyed it very much, lol the pic took wonderful movie, cheri yes I sketch and draw, I don't paint although I've always wanted to learn, my grandmother was a painter though, for me I choose to write instead so I paint with words my brush is my pen, my canvas the open blank screen or page, so we have these crafts in common, yes, cheri

Lin Lane

November 22, 2015 at 6:12 PM

It seems we do, cheri. There was a period of about 6 months when I couldn't write. I pulled out my paints. Then I started making jewelry. I enjoy all of them, but my favorite is writing. I always enjoy your visits.. Thanks, Cheri.

Andrea Dietrich

November 22, 2015 at 3:29 PM

hahaha. I LOVE this one.(wish I thought of it. I give you first place)

Lin Lane

November 22, 2015 at 3:33 PM

LOL I laughed as I typed it, and was going to title it Epigram Slam, but I thought that might incense him! Oh pish posh if it had. Thanks for laughing with me. ;)