Tick Tock

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Tick Tock Tick Tock, the clock keeps moving... one moment then the next. Sometimes I wish that I could slow it down, and make it go around again, to spend more of my life on the good parts, and less or none at all on the bad. Tick Tock

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/30/2022 9:32:00 AM

I love this poem; it made me think.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/27/2022 6:03:00 PM

I want to spend only enough time on the bad to appreciate the good in my life. Nicely penned Ann. Linda

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 7/26/2022 4:19:00 AM

Such a lovely write Ann.... yes if only we could slow it done... for many good things... Thank you dear friend for your recent visit to my page and your comment... Have a blessed day... Hugs... ~ Ani

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2022 8:27:00 AM

my feelings are the same. Good one, Ann

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/23/2022 1:54:00 PM

Unfortunately, that is not the way of time, as you know, Ann. We must make the best of every minute, for once it is gone, it is gone forever. Even as we speak of the next minute, it too has fled!