Barbara Gorelick Poet Rictameter

Tic Toc

Tick Toc
The clock turning
Round , round without ceasing
Blow your horn in celebration
For time passes and the shadows lengthen
So dance and sing in the moonlight
Laugh, time is the jester
Another day
Tick Toc

Barbara Gorelick
9/2/13
Just Nine Lines contest..

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Poet Destroyer A September 13, 2013 at 10:11 AM Nic once... ... always love LINDA

Skat A September 12, 2013 at 8:13 AM congrats ~SKAT~

Kim Merryman September 11, 2013 at 8:53 PM Fantastic write, Barbara! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Danesh Morgan September 11, 2013 at 8:22 PM Congrats on your win. Morgan

Nette Onclaud September 11, 2013 at 6:11 AM love the jester part, barbara.. congrats on your fine slot..:) huggs

Tahera Mannan September 10, 2013 at 10:59 PM Many congrats Barbara for this win and write.

Sandra Adams September 10, 2013 at 8:22 PM wonderful write and win...congrats to you :)

Richard Lamoureux September 10, 2013 at 4:42 PM I'm glad I took time to read this tic toc, grat job. Congrats

Dr. Vandana Sharma September 3, 2013 at 8:19 AM beautifully done!

Johnny Rhinem September 2, 2013 at 3:37 PM † I Think We'll Just Take That Clock As Time And Toss It Out The Window. Smile, You Know ? Cool Poe Like The Layout. Love, John *

Ilene Bauer September 2, 2013 at 2:34 PM you've accomplished quite a lot in just 9 lines! well done!

Eileen Manassian September 2, 2013 at 1:15 PM LOVELY! Beautiful, Barbara...I really loved the feel of this, and the message to live every moment...Bless you for this sweet poem. Good luck in contest! :)