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Tic Tac Toe?

A hankerin’ an unscratched itch which one doesn’t wish to scratch for one a need for heat and warmth a turnstile dreamer ushers night to morn. A what the hell why not devil may care for who else does? The siren calls Ulysses to her gate. Flower scents surmount the desert dryness of aging heroines. Lotharios play grinding tic tac and toes searching for the golden fleece. And neither Heaven nor Hell concerns themselves with such mundane matters.

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Date: 2/9/2010 10:08:00 AM
The noble poet rises to join her voice with the discourse of the ages ... love the mythography lifting the local like a Hercules to view.
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Date: 1/28/2010 3:20:00 PM
Deborah, This one made me think. And I think that Heaven and Hell do care. That's why they play tug-o-war with our spirits so often. Question: Could this poem be be an Epyllion form poem? It's a poem with a little mythology entwined. What do you think? Love to you. Dane Ann
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Date: 1/24/2010 11:57:00 AM
Winners and losers we are but no one cares nice write Daniel
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Date: 1/23/2010 3:46:00 PM
We are all players in this game, Deborah. And you certainly bring your message home well in the last verse! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/23/2010 2:05:00 PM
'this reminds me of something, from a play, a movie? Can't put my finger on it. YOu sure employ clever images, Deborah. I love that last little stanza. Luv, Andrea
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