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Thursday Afternoon

Dust shed from long - gone memories Old clothes cleared from the corners of dark closets Cobweb caked, stained over time (It no longer fits) (Is this mine?) (Wait a minute...i remember!) Orange Happiness. Mayfair. The faded sunshine print on an old dress. Like thin cardboard. An old song. Silently retreating into the corner. Tendrils of string. An echo. (I have been waiting for you) Dirt under my nails. Dust smeared accross my sweaty December brow like thin oily brush strokes by Cezanne. And still time for the soul is different somehow. Undeterred by gravity. Dizziness. Inertia. (Where are you going? Please don't leave me.) Slipping away. Floorboards crumbling beneath my feet like thin sun-baked clay. Grapping onto old friends by their snaky cobwebs, my fingers ripping through their time - torn clothes. Slipping away into the Grey. Falling. (what am i doing here...?) "...hello Granny! We've come to visit you! Do you know remember us?"

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Date: 9/7/2016 12:40:00 PM
Hi Keith, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/7/2016 11:43:00 AM
Keith Bettesworth, awe, nice family poem,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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