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Thunder Storm

Darkened heavy skies
Rain saturating the ground
Crashing clouds clapping

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/5/2017 6:14:00 PM
A beautiful haiku Elizabeth of lovely imagery and alliteration. Excellent and enjoyed!
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Date: 7/3/2017 9:07:00 AM
A haiku, heavy with emotion!
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 7/3/2017 12:17:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 7/2/2017 9:53:00 AM
Your poem makes pictures in my mind of past storms I've been in. One thought just leads to another, then to another. That;s the power of your haiku
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 7/2/2017 11:08:00 AM
Thank you Alfred
Date: 5/21/2017 7:00:00 PM
Lovely imagery and powerful use of alliteration! Well done! Regards, John.
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 5/22/2017 2:32:00 AM
Thank you John for visiting my poems.
Date: 4/26/2017 12:29:00 PM
Hi Elizabeth. Growing up in the Chicago area, I've experienced many thunderstorms. Your haiku captures them very well. :-)
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 4/26/2017 1:30:00 PM
Thank you Carol.
Date: 4/26/2017 3:15:00 AM
Lovely brilliant haiku, Elizabeth.
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 4/26/2017 3:51:00 AM
Thank you as always Victor
Date: 4/26/2017 3:10:00 AM
I agree with Chris on this! A wonderful haiku!
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 4/26/2017 3:50:00 AM
Thank you for giving me your support through your comments? : )
Date: 4/25/2017 3:23:00 PM
You have definitely captured the essence of a thunderstorm in this wonderful Haiku.
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 4/26/2017 2:34:00 AM
Thank you