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Thunder Crashes

thunder crashes. . . . near the fireplace I inhale rain’s scent in your hair you snuggle warmly in my arms. . . . I taste your mouth For Charles Henderson's Short Short Haiku Poetry Contest

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Thomas Martin

Date: 5/30/2015 1:33:00 PM

Great!! Don't often give 7's, but here is greatly deserved!

Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 12:08:00 PM

nice and romatic

Danny Stinson

Date: 12/1/2011 10:41:00 PM

Beautiful haiku. Well thought out.

Robert Johnson

Date: 12/1/2011 1:10:00 PM

As I await loves tender touch. The moon shines up above. It braces me just like a crutch. As I survive the push and shove.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/28/2011 3:30:00 PM

hot hot hot! loved these 2 Andie congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/28/2011 10:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Charles' "Short Short Haiku" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Joseph Osita

Date: 11/26/2011 3:39:00 PM

Many congrats on your big place win in the contest. Have a nice day

David Williams

Date: 11/26/2011 12:06:00 PM

Andrea congrats on your win, my apologies for the lateness as i thought i had already done them all..David

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/26/2011 11:17:00 AM

I am so happy to see this in the list, Andrea! I really loved this couple of romantic haiku :) Super congrats and hugs to you!

Kash Poet

Date: 11/26/2011 8:14:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea on your win .Very nice picture of romance you have painted here.Yeah I have done it!I am looking at an distant island.

Margaret Foster

Date: 11/26/2011 12:51:00 AM

A cosy warm place to be on a wild night.Well done in making both relate so well.congrats...Margaret p.s. seasons of love. there's that word 'weird' again

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/25/2011 8:21:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Andrea. Warm and sensual. Kim

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/25/2011 4:26:00 PM

Such romantic visions these offer and so happy to see them in the winner's circle Andrea. Congratulations! I hate it that my eyes won't allow me to read much. The computer glasses I bought are not helping much.

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 11/25/2011 3:19:00 PM

Nice romantic Haiku,Andrea.Congratulations on your win...

Nathan D.

Date: 11/20/2011 2:54:00 PM

go read jeffry cohan he is an awesome poet

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/20/2011 1:51:00 PM

You create a cute little scene with your two Haiku. love phyl

Don Johnson

Date: 11/19/2011 12:39:00 AM

lovely haiku flows ok , words planned yet shortened hey, quite ok...

Jack Horne

Date: 11/16/2011 2:33:00 PM

love these haiku, Andrea - I used to think they were easy and then I realised just how hard they are

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/16/2011 2:43:00 AM

Hi Andrea... how are you?,, Me i love rain scent..but, not from the fireplace... this is smoking hot...lol.. well the ending line.... good luck in the contest... now i know what a short haiku is..lol... well when you stop my newest haiku's... i did it on purpose to do them all wrong.. but, i do want your input... take care,..p.d.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/15/2011 8:09:00 PM

Beautiful poem! always, Laura

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/15/2011 8:01:00 PM

very nice imagery Andrea.. my best to u in the contest.. my hand is asleep so am typing with one finger..oh..haha.. have to laugh..

Rick Parise

Date: 11/15/2011 7:23:00 PM

Excuse me.........WOW ~ a little HOT ~great imagery.

Rick Parise
Date: 11/15/2011 7:25:00 PM

Re: your comment ~Songbird Rise. I want to enter it in Brian's contest but it says FROM YOUR FIRST100. My poems have been deleted by the soup, it doesn't go back that far!!!let me look again

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/15/2011 5:35:00 PM

What a very cozy couple of haiku you have here, Andrea :) Leaves the reader warm and toasty :) Enjoyed this one, sweetie :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/15/2011 4:09:00 PM

Nice romantic short poem! Hope you win! Have you entered the Poetrysoup contest as well? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

James Fraser

Date: 11/15/2011 2:23:00 PM

Being with a loved one during a thunderstorm sure has a wow factor. Good luck in the contest Andrea :)