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Thunder Crashes

thunder crashes. . . . 
near the fireplace I inhale
rain’s scent in your hair

you snuggle
warmly in my arms. . . .
I taste your mouth


For Charles Henderson's
Short Short Haiku Poetry Contest

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Thomas Martin Date: 5/30/2015 1:33:00 PM Great!! Don't often give 7's, but here is greatly deserved! Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 5/16/2015 12:08:00 PM nice and romatic Login to Reply

Danny Stinson Date: 12/1/2011 10:41:00 PM Beautiful haiku. Well thought out. Login to Reply

Robert Johnson Date: 12/1/2011 1:10:00 PM As I await loves tender touch. The moon shines up above. It braces me just like a crutch. As I survive the push and shove. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/28/2011 3:30:00 PM hot hot hot! loved these 2 Andie congrad's on your win! Light & Love Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/28/2011 10:47:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Charles' "Short Short Haiku" contest Andrea. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Joseph Osita Date: 11/26/2011 3:39:00 PM Many congrats on your big place win in the contest. Have a nice day Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 11/26/2011 12:06:00 PM Andrea congrats on your win, my apologies for the lateness as i thought i had already done them all..David Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 11/26/2011 11:17:00 AM I am so happy to see this in the list, Andrea! I really loved this couple of romantic haiku :) Super congrats and hugs to you! Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 11/26/2011 8:14:00 AM Congratulations Andrea on your win .Very nice picture of romance you have painted here.Yeah I have done it!I am looking at an distant island. Login to Reply

Margaret Foster Date: 11/26/2011 12:51:00 AM A cosy warm place to be on a wild night.Well done in making both relate so well.congrats...Margaret p.s. seasons of love. there's that word 'weird' again Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 11/25/2011 8:21:00 PM Congrats on your win, Andrea. Warm and sensual. Kim Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 11/25/2011 4:26:00 PM Such romantic visions these offer and so happy to see them in the winner's circle Andrea. Congratulations! I hate it that my eyes won't allow me to read much. The computer glasses I bought are not helping much. Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 11/25/2011 3:19:00 PM Nice romantic Haiku,Andrea.Congratulations on your win... Login to Reply

Nathan D. Date: 11/20/2011 2:54:00 PM go read jeffry cohan he is an awesome poet Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 11/20/2011 1:51:00 PM You create a cute little scene with your two Haiku. love phyl Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 11/19/2011 12:39:00 AM lovely haiku flows ok , words planned yet shortened hey, quite ok... Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 11/16/2011 2:33:00 PM love these haiku, Andrea - I used to think they were easy and then I realised just how hard they are Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/16/2011 2:43:00 AM Hi Andrea... how are you?,, Me i love rain scent..but, not from the fireplace... this is smoking hot...lol.. well the ending line.... good luck in the contest... now i know what a short haiku is..lol... well when you stop my newest haiku's... i did it on purpose to do them all wrong.. but, i do want your input... take care,..p.d. Login to Reply

Laura Breidenthal Date: 11/15/2011 8:09:00 PM Beautiful poem! always, Laura Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/15/2011 8:01:00 PM very nice imagery Andrea.. my best to u in the contest.. my hand is asleep so am typing with one finger..oh..haha.. have to laugh.. Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 11/15/2011 5:35:00 PM What a very cozy couple of haiku you have here, Andrea :) Leaves the reader warm and toasty :) Enjoyed this one, sweetie :) Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 11/15/2011 4:09:00 PM Nice romantic short poem! Hope you win! Have you entered the Poetrysoup contest as well? Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 11/15/2011 2:23:00 PM Being with a loved one during a thunderstorm sure has a wow factor. Good luck in the contest Andrea :) Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 11/15/2011 12:45:00 PM You make thunderstorms sound so romantic in your haiku, Andrea. I'm sure Charles will love it. I probably should just delete my entry. Can't get a handle on what Charles and Deb are seeking. Thanks for your comments on Sparrow on a Ledge. No, it didn't place, but it was based on a lady who lived across the street. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

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