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Thunder !

Storm cloud canopy wind rain waves whitecaps crash rocks lightening streak flash.

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Skat A

Date: 3/2/2010 8:23:00 PM

Great you just made thunder sound like music to my ears. (j.k.) thunder makes me fear with fright..Enjoyed reading your poem tonight. Thank you 4 your kind comment...

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/9/2010 6:07:00 AM

hot poem!!

Date: 1/30/2010 9:53:00 AM

Nice use of multi-sensed imagery and alliteration for a creative view. This poem comes alive through your words. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Have a good weekend. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/28/2010 2:29:00 PM

Very descriptive of a spring storm. Keep the creative pen flowing.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/28/2010 5:34:00 AM

Brilliant capture in this one, Robert. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 1/27/2010 5:28:00 PM

Very good. Well done and I really mean that truly. Thank you very much for your kindness and your comments. Regards, Gerard.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/27/2010 5:26:00 AM

Oh Robert what a spectacular Haiku. I think this is about the most I have ever seen said in so few words. I love Haiku. Love, Carol

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 1/26/2010 9:58:00 PM

That is indeed one wild storm. Great Haiku! Robert! striking imagery. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your very kind comments on my poems today. You are quite a good writer yourself. Best regards, Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/26/2010 7:45:00 PM

Reminds me of last summer when we had so many thunderstorms... great words and descriptive visuals here Robert... by the way, what happend to Taz and Mary? have not been on Soup for a month or more.. no one finished the tag game either after I tagged Douglas Ace... hope they will return... enjoyed.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Margaret Foster

Date: 1/26/2010 7:14:00 PM

lightening streak flash..... followed by a great roll and crack of thunder. I can see and hear it all. good work Robert.....cheers Margaret

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/26/2010 5:47:00 PM

Not a good day for sailing!!!! This is like a wonderful painting! Well described! ~ Love, Carrie

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/26/2010 4:26:00 PM

This is a beautiful picture, Robert. I love a good storm as long as I'm indoors, feeling safe and warm! Great job! Peace, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2010 2:41:00 PM

Very vivid with alliteration, Robert. Makes you feel the storm.

Constance La France

Date: 1/26/2010 1:56:00 PM

I am standing on the rocks, dear heart, my long raven hair blows in that wind... your soup mail, did not come, it says server error... can you try again.. and thanks so much for your comment on my poetry...

Susan Mills

Date: 1/26/2010 1:40:00 PM

Captivating haiku! -Susan Mills

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/26/2010 12:57:00 PM

Like the way you wove the images of the sea during a storm into this haiku, Robert. To me the ocean seems to reflect nature's wrath more than anything else. A "flash" of brilliance in this one! Love, Carolyn