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Thru Their Eyes

He holds me in his prison, Chained me to the wall. I can’t leave the room. When I try to leave I fall. My first reaction when I learn I am so trapped, my headache a terrible tick. 'Cause it is quite clear his intent; Revolver chamber, spin, click, click, click. I guess I should be thankful I am given a meal, quite cheap. I assume it is my last but I can't swallow, So, put it in the fridge, maybe it will keep. I fight within myself to hold on to my senses Refuse to let the circumstance cause me to weep. But this war inside is a grandious struggle Can't give up or I will end in an unwanted heap. My medication is wearing off now Increased stress, I see I'm shaking wildly. This will never do, I simply must keep fighting Can I have my next dose please, I ask mildly. Yes, I must keep fighting To triumph Over this criminal, This criminal disease. 8-13-16 Edits were assisted by VB, a respected fellow poet. When people think Parkinson's disease often they think of lack of balance and the tremor. There are other lesser-known symptoms though. These include but are not limited to: Depression Decline of mental function Difficulty or inability to swallow Greatly Disturbed sleep Bradykinesia (slow movements) Dyskinesia (jerking of the head and neck and limbs) Muscle rigidity Vision change Masked face (blank or non-expressive face) Vocal strength diminished (volume decreased) Vocal range diminished (increasingly difficult to speak/sing the higher pitches) Among others. I hope this poem helps to shed some light.

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Date: 8/17/2016 9:08:00 AM
Congrats on your second place.
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Jolene Cheyney
Date: 8/17/2016 10:43:00 PM
Thank you, I think it's the first time I've received anything higher than HM on this site. Which adds an extra level of excitement.
Date: 8/17/2016 9:00:00 AM
Ty for the good info in this poem Jolene we are all prisoners in our bodies. Pls consider this as a feature poem just tick the box on edit page congrats on 2nd place
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Jolene Cheyney
Date: 8/17/2016 10:44:00 PM
Thank you, but what does it mean to be a feature poem?
Date: 8/16/2016 8:00:00 PM
Hi Jolene, Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved.A Big seven:-) Alexis P.S. It's so sad to hear that you face so many health challenges. I echo Victor,I hope you find some relief.
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Jolene Cheyney
Date: 8/17/2016 10:50:00 PM
Started taking Carbidopa levodopa about mid June. It's the strongest medication they have for Parkinson's. Which is why I hesitated to take it side effects of long term use combined with the fact that I'm fairly young to be dealing with this disease to take the strongest at my age what does that leave for me to take in 10 years? But there comes a point where the symptoms just demand a stronger medication. And I must say it is helping, I just worry about the cost and in a greater sense than financial.
Date: 8/15/2016 1:21:00 AM
Oh dear....My heart aches reading this good poem of yours. Michael J Fox suffers from this disease. Is it a fictitious write? If you are a sufferer, I wish you serenity and inner strength to deal with it. My mother had MS and eventually died of it. I know the pain of suffering. Blessings
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Jolene Cheyney
Date: 8/15/2016 1:35:00 AM
I have Parkinson's I have fibromyalgia I have Raynaud's and I have chronic pain from a rollover car accident which occurred December 2004. I was not wearing my seatbelt and the roof of my car was dented outward about 4 inches where my head hit. I was not thrown out and did not lose consciousness but suffer the consequences nonetheless.

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