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What I would give To see the world Through the eyes Of eager curiosity And playful innocence With a heart pure As a summer morn The future out there For the writing An open book What I would give AP: 3rd place 2022 Submitted on January 1, 2020 for contest STRAND SELECT 2 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - HONORABLE MENTION Originally posted on October 7, 2019

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Date: 1/3/2020 1:28:00 PM
Line congrats on honorable mention!;)
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Date: 1/3/2020 9:38:00 PM
Thanks, Brenda. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/3/2020 11:34:00 AM
Hi Line, Congratulations on your placement with this wonderfully expressed idea of childhood and the future - a good reminder for all of us to stay young at heart. There is great depth of emotion in your economy of words!
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Date: 1/3/2020 9:39:00 PM
Thanks, Sam.Most appreciated.
Date: 10/17/2019 10:16:00 PM
Nice poem. Oh to be young and innocent again...
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Date: 10/17/2019 10:29:00 PM
Thanks, Juliet. Most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 10/10/2019 1:32:00 PM
Such a cute poem Line, the curiosity and a pure heart, makes those inquisitive young eyes so adorable. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 10/10/2019 4:13:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jennifer.
Date: 10/7/2019 11:35:00 PM
I have to say Miss Line I see a lot of the world thru your eyes and your work thru eyes of eager curiosity and a heart pure heart! Well done!
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Date: 10/8/2019 12:26:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely visit and compliment, Timothy.
Date: 10/7/2019 8:19:00 PM
i love this....being i work around children i can relate to this one....lovely write! :)
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Date: 10/7/2019 8:56:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra. Mot appreciated.
Date: 10/7/2019 8:15:00 PM
Through the lens of innocence... yes, that is what grace does, helps you to become like a little child to God... Your poem is fabulous. I love it. God bless you always, Gina
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Date: 10/7/2019 8:56:00 PM
Thanks, Gina. Most appreciated.

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