Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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Thru the Lens

What I would give
To see the world
Through the eyes
Of eager curiosity
And playful innocence

With a heart pure
As a summer morn
The future out there
For the writing
An open book
What I would give



AP: 3rd place 2022

Submitted on January 1, 2020 for contest STRAND SELECT 2 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  HONORABLE MENTION

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Brenda Chiri January 3, 2020 at 1:28 PM Line congrats on honorable mention!;) Line Gauthier January 3, 2020 at 9:38 PM Thanks, Brenda. Much appreciated.

Sam Kauffman January 3, 2020 at 11:34 AM Hi Line, Congratulations on your placement with this wonderfully expressed idea of childhood and the future - a good reminder for all of us to stay young at heart. There is great depth of emotion in your economy of words! Line Gauthier January 3, 2020 at 9:39 PM Thanks, Sam.Most appreciated.

Juliet Ligon October 17, 2019 at 10:16 PM Nice poem. Oh to be young and innocent again... Line Gauthier October 17, 2019 at 10:29 PM Thanks, Juliet. Most appreciated visit and comment.

Jennifer Proxenos October 10, 2019 at 1:32 PM Such a cute poem Line, the curiosity and a pure heart, makes those inquisitive young eyes so adorable. Hugs, Jennifer. Line Gauthier October 10, 2019 at 4:13 PM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jennifer.

Timothy Mcguire October 7, 2019 at 11:35 PM I have to say Miss Line I see a lot of the world thru your eyes and your work thru eyes of eager curiosity and a heart pure heart! Well done! Line Gauthier October 8, 2019 at 12:26 AM Thanks for the lovely visit and compliment, Timothy.

Sandra Adams October 7, 2019 at 8:19 PM i love this....being i work around children i can relate to this one....lovely write! :) Line Gauthier October 7, 2019 at 8:56 PM Thanks, Sandra. Mot appreciated.

Regina Mcintosh October 7, 2019 at 8:15 PM Through the lens of innocence... yes, that is what grace does, helps you to become like a little child to God... Your poem is fabulous. I love it. God bless you always, Gina Line Gauthier October 7, 2019 at 8:56 PM Thanks, Gina. Most appreciated.