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Thru Ab-Straction To Absolution

Take "me" away,, from truths..) un-form me" unseen to halogise with... May my aptness be swirled and re-involved prescience emerge now as resolutions to eternal resolve..Are become..! copyright Joe Maverick 2012 in support of Brian Strands abstract me competition

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/6/2012 8:13:00 PM

Feels as though this had been penned during profound thought spaces, Joe! "un-form me"...until "become". "eternal resolve" gives this a decisive note. Best wishes, Love, Mikki

Joe Maverick
Date: 4/11/2023 10:57:00 PM

Thank you for commenting.'

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 5/14/2012 8:52:00 PM

My mind becomes abstract reading this; I needed a good tweak tonight to get my mind in gear. All the best in the contest! Luv, Lizzie

Joe Maverick
Date: 4/11/2023 10:57:00 PM

Thank you for commenting.'

Don Johnson

Date: 3/12/2012 4:58:00 AM

abstract it is ...for brian tis... keep at it cobber mate....

Joe Maverick
Date: 4/11/2023 10:58:00 PM

Thanks old mate Your comments great.'

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/5/2012 9:57:00 AM

Thanks for your support....I am ok just had a bad day and blew some steam!!

Jack Horne

Date: 2/2/2012 1:55:00 PM

very clever piece, my friend

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/27/2012 12:00:00 PM

I am stopping by to thank you for your comment on my poem "Touching" Joe. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/22/2012 8:55:00 AM

so this is what it's all about, (abstract) that is. thanks Joe, i'm learning every day. harry

Don Johnson

Date: 1/21/2012 3:20:00 PM

Well done Joe should abstract Brian, without a contradiction, thanks mate for comments....

Judy Ball

Date: 1/20/2012 7:53:00 PM

WoW! You never fail to make me think. I love your way with words. Good Stuff my friend. God Bless, JB

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/20/2012 8:39:00 AM

enjoyed....may need the dictionary to fully understand. our preacher gave out some words that I didn't know and I told my hubby that he was just showing out....or making stuff up. though I did find the word in the dictionary. hehe!!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/17/2012 5:50:00 AM

almost blank verse Joe..unrhymed verse with meter ..Take me away/from the truths unform me/ unseen to the halogise with/May my aptness be swirled and reformed re involved a prescience/to emerge now/as a resolution eternal/ to resolve/ to become..very cool bean concept and excellent mental jaunt..Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/12/2012 5:24:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your great work..Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Judy Ball

Date: 1/10/2012 4:45:00 PM

WoW! This one is really deep. A fine entry. Should be a winner. God Bless, JB

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/10/2012 11:08:00 AM

Hey there Joe, you sure brought abstract to the table with this one ;) I enjoyed it.. Thank you for dropping in on my side of the world and for the smiles you bring ;) tc Wilma

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/9/2012 10:56:00 PM

Dear Joe, you are wonderful... Taking it all back... Thanks for the becoming thoughts... Take care..pd

Kimberly Larocca

Date: 1/9/2012 8:25:00 PM

Thanks for the visit. This was a very interesting write.

M.I.A .

Date: 1/9/2012 6:28:00 PM

you are like picasso joe, not easily understood but one just knew there's a greatness in you. good luck on the contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2012 11:44:00 AM

Hey, joe am having to use joe's ;puter (MY joe. haha) just wanted to say hi. Gotta get off his laptop now and get to church. BYE, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/7/2012 6:16:00 PM

pure pristine work of art Joe.. good luck in contest my friend... thankxx for uplifting words and comments and well wishes to me.. much appreciated.. glad to be back ..slow but sure.. learning to type all over again luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2012 9:58:00 PM

thanks for your kidding comments today, Joe.You are the greatest!

Judy Ball

Date: 1/3/2012 7:24:00 AM

This is great Joe. I only hope I can do well with my own resolutions. I'm just gonna try to learn to keep my mouth shut and breathe through my nose. ;) God Bless and Happy New Year, JB :)

Nancy Jones

Date: 1/2/2012 8:47:00 PM

me too.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/2/2012 8:34:00 PM

YUP, that's abstract all right!!! Gosh, I don't have a clue what to use for a contest like this. This seems a good one for New years as well! LUv, Andrea

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/2/2012 5:47:00 PM

I had to look up a couple of the words Joe but it came together perfectly. Hope the resolutions are able to be kept!

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/2/2012 5:40:00 PM

Cheers