Through Time In 60

Icicle hardens; Her prisoner wails. Soft dripped; Resentful his seasonal sun. Clung tightly winter, her grip again fails; Cheeks slip on puddles where four start to run. Years of denial their story entails – Captives held hostage by starry travails. 1/27/2017 Submitted for: 'A Rhyme in 60' Syllables checked on howmanysyllables.com
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Inman Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 7:15 AM
Like the flow Phillip.
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 6:50 PM
a very interesting one. Metaphorical!
Smith Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 11:47 AM
Congratulations Phillip...
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February 1, 2017 at 3:53 PM
Hi Philip, Congratulations on your win!
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February 1, 2017 at 2:07 PM
Very good, Phillip. Congratulations on your win. // Barry
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February 1, 2017 at 1:23 PM
Action packed brevity poem! Congrats, Phillip!
Scars Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 12:06 PM
oh Phillip- beautifully written! Such smooth rhythm and rhyme...lovely poem, thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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January 28, 2017 at 12:39 PM
- A great one, Phillip - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 28, 2017 at 3:25 AM
Oh. Love this. It's really tough, with that rhyme scheme, I'm thinking of one too. This one flows so naturally. Good luck in the contest.
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