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Through Time In 60

Icicle hardens; Her prisoner wails. Soft dripped; Resentful his seasonal sun. Clung tightly winter, her grip again fails; Cheeks slip on puddles where four start to run. Years of denial their story entails – Captives held hostage by starry travails. 1/27/2017 Submitted for: 'A Rhyme in 60' Syllables checked on howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 2/3/2017 7:15:00 AM
Like the flow Phillip.
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Date: 2/2/2017 6:50:00 PM
a very interesting one. Metaphorical!
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Date: 2/2/2017 11:47:00 AM
Congratulations Phillip...
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Date: 2/1/2017 3:53:00 PM
Hi Philip, Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/1/2017 2:07:00 PM
Very good, Phillip. Congratulations on your win. // Barry
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Date: 2/1/2017 1:23:00 PM
Action packed brevity poem! Congrats, Phillip!
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Date: 2/1/2017 12:06:00 PM
oh Phillip- beautifully written! Such smooth rhythm and rhyme...lovely poem, thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/28/2017 12:39:00 PM
- A great one, Phillip - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/28/2017 3:25:00 AM
Oh. Love this. It's really tough, with that rhyme scheme, I'm thinking of one too. This one flows so naturally. Good luck in the contest.
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