Through Their Eyes

A cold blood murder,
A rough raw slaughter,
Sank in red pool she laid prostrate,
For she the girl who betrayed,
In the name of love!
In the name of love!
Her mesmerizing voice,
What a method of choice,
Richness is what attracted,
What a vicious play she enacted,
Never believed when Peter said,
Never believed when Pan said,
The trust was so much,
A step more than a mother’s touch,
Until I saw the real you,
My vision was blurred and never knew,
On the bed with my friend,
And now nothing to defend,
Not a minute I thought,
Not any reason I sought,
The lover beast so vindictive,
A stab on her heart very instinctive,
I tasted her blood chill,
A very cruel callous kill,
May be a murderer, I was portrayed,
But no regrets for she the girl who betrayed.


02 August, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 8/3/2016 9:23:00 AM
A very powerful write, Madhupriya. Written so well and so full of the emotion of betrayal and instinctive revenge! This should do very well in the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 8/4/2016 11:06:00 AM
Thank you Sandra;)
Date: 8/2/2016 1:34:00 PM
Hi Madhupriya, this is murder and passion and drama. It sounds like it really happened? I will also read some of your other work. Good write
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 8/4/2016 11:08:00 AM
thanks Jannie for your lovely comments;)
Date: 8/2/2016 11:00:00 AM
A very different style from you...well weaved
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 8/4/2016 9:43:00 AM
thank you Tim;)
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