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Through Their Eyes

A cold blood murder, A rough raw slaughter, Sank in red pool she laid prostrate, For she the girl who betrayed, In the name of love! In the name of love! Her mesmerizing voice, What a method of choice, Richness is what attracted, What a vicious play she enacted, Never believed when Peter said, Never believed when Pan said, The trust was so much, A step more than a mother’s touch, Until I saw the real you, My vision was blurred and never knew, On the bed with my friend, And now nothing to defend, Not a minute I thought, Not any reason I sought, The lover beast so vindictive, A stab on her heart very instinctive, I tasted her blood chill, A very cruel callous kill, May be a murderer, I was portrayed, But no regrets for she the girl who betrayed. 02 August, 2016

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Date: 8/3/2016 9:23:00 AM
A very powerful write, Madhupriya. Written so well and so full of the emotion of betrayal and instinctive revenge! This should do very well in the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 8/4/2016 11:06:00 AM
Thank you Sandra;)
Date: 8/2/2016 1:34:00 PM
Hi Madhupriya, this is murder and passion and drama. It sounds like it really happened? I will also read some of your other work. Good write
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 8/4/2016 11:08:00 AM
thanks Jannie for your lovely comments;)
Date: 8/2/2016 11:00:00 AM
A very different style from you...well weaved
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Madhupriya Shanmugam
Date: 8/4/2016 9:43:00 AM
thank you Tim;)

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