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Through Their Eyes

8/1/16 Through their eyes I seem to kill with no motive at all But through my eyes I have all the more reason to. I struck a knife to his heart and watched him fall, as the blood spewed from his almost lifeless body, I laughed. I laughed with content, and with everything I had I cried also. As I saw the life drain from his eyes I remember how he watched me cry when he took my innocence away. I remembered how he would laugh at my pain time and time again. And here I am now, standing in front of him, watching him die as I had pictured so many times before. Here he is beginning for my forgiveness, beginning for me to save him, when all I wanted back then was for him to stop and save me. But it's too late now. Through his eyes i'm a murder, and through my eyes he got what he deserved.

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Date: 8/16/2016 5:29:00 PM
Congrats Breanna, for your well, deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 8/12/2016 11:18:00 AM
Well done Breanna. congratulations...
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Date: 8/11/2016 5:55:00 PM
Hi, Breanna, congratulations on your podium, first place win! Well-deserved. Sandra
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Date: 8/11/2016 3:32:00 PM
great poem with good suspense Breanna congrats on 1st place hugs
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Date: 8/11/2016 3:15:00 PM
This is masterful,congrats Breanna!
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Date: 8/11/2016 2:48:00 PM
Hi Breanna, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 8/2/2016 1:42:00 PM
Nice one, Brianna. Linda
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Date: 8/2/2016 12:19:00 AM
Breanna, wow...so good..skat
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