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Through the Soot

When living in any big city, The air might be sooty or gritty, So many will lose Their apartment’s nice views Due to windows with grime – what a pity! It’s cumbersome keeping them clean. All New Yorkers will know what I mean; For the sparkle I got When I Windexed, will not, By tomorrow, retain any sheen. So my vistas are subtly skewed, Since with schmutz all my views are imbued. Yet somehow, through the soot I might notice afoot, On a terrace, a neighbor who’s nude!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/14/2018 7:35:00 AM
Oh the last line is an absolute hoot... think I'd prefer grimy windows lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/13/2018 5:09:00 PM
A slice of urban life, to be sure. And neatly delivered in a package of three clever and perfect limericks. Great job!
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Date: 9/13/2018 4:09:00 PM
haha. the last one is the kicker!!!
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