Through the Mist I See

My hand strokes the Crystal Ball
I peer, as it fills with Mist
Then appears a Mushroom Cloud
I cannot see where

A child alone and crying
on a filthy run down street
A Military Tyrant
as he shakes his fist

A barren field, void of life
parched, the Earth is deeply cracked
But wait! Through the Mist I see
a Rose stands alone.


For Linda-Maries Crystal Ball contest

Copyright 2011 By Rd. Pickett
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 3:53 PM
Congrats on your win with this excellent work.Sara
Brown Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 10:21 AM
Congratulations on your win Richard. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 1:46 PM
Richard, Great to share with one of the best a place. Smile. Great to read you worthy poem. Congratulations, Agape, Moses"
Mehta Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 8:59 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda,Richard
Quigley Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 12:41 AM
Great write Richard. Congratulations
Sweetheart Avatar
September 18, 2011 at 9:21 PM
CONGRATS TAZ ON YOUR FOURTH PLACE WIN WITH THIS TOUCHING ENTRY LUV..
Meade Stephenson Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 11:46 AM
Great write! Good luck in the contest....very thought provoking and deep!
Dufresne Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 6:40 PM
..... heeeeee'sss bbaaaaaaaccck! Awesome dude
Babcock Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 1:06 PM
This is a wonderful write and I know will do well in Linda-maries contest. Thanks for the comment . God Bless Phyl
Freeman Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 12:14 PM
This is really good Bro Prickett. Best of wishes in Linda's contest. Should do really well. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 12:06 PM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Taz....good luck luv... read fully at judging time luv.. would u please put your name on your entry for me...thankxx luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 12:06 PM
sorry luv...just saw it at the bottom... too much vacation..haha..
Guzzi Avatar
September 9, 2011 at 9:19 AM
wow hard to do..those roses are not easy to grow ;) good luck in the contest Taz thanks for stopping by my works! light &love
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 10:06 PM
wow, Richard, DEEP one. Good one!! One of the best in the contest.
Culverhouse Avatar
September 8, 2011 at 12:21 PM
enjoyed your work....hope you are well....Thanks for your kind comments! You brightened my day!
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