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Through the Mist I See

My hand strokes the Crystal Ball I peer, as it fills with Mist Then appears a Mushroom Cloud I cannot see where A child alone and crying on a filthy run down street A Military Tyrant as he shakes his fist A barren field, void of life parched, the Earth is deeply cracked But wait! Through the Mist I see a Rose stands alone. For Linda-Maries Crystal Ball contest Copyright 2011 By Rd. Pickett

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Date: 9/20/2011 3:53:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this excellent work.Sara
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Date: 9/20/2011 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Richard. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/19/2011 1:46:00 PM
Richard, Great to share with one of the best a place. Smile. Great to read you worthy poem. Congratulations, Agape, Moses"
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Date: 9/19/2011 8:59:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda,Richard
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Date: 9/19/2011 12:41:00 AM
Great write Richard. Congratulations
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Date: 9/18/2011 9:21:00 PM
CONGRATS TAZ ON YOUR FOURTH PLACE WIN WITH THIS TOUCHING ENTRY LUV..
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Date: 9/13/2011 11:46:00 AM
Great write! Good luck in the contest....very thought provoking and deep!
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Date: 9/9/2011 6:40:00 PM
..... heeeeee'sss bbaaaaaaaccck! Awesome dude
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Date: 9/9/2011 1:06:00 PM
This is a wonderful write and I know will do well in Linda-maries contest. Thanks for the comment . God Bless Phyl
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Date: 9/9/2011 12:14:00 PM
This is really good Bro Prickett. Best of wishes in Linda's contest. Should do really well. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/9/2011 12:06:00 PM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Taz....good luck luv... read fully at judging time luv.. would u please put your name on your entry for me...thankxx luv..
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Date: 9/9/2011 12:06:00 PM
sorry luv...just saw it at the bottom... too much vacation..haha..
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Date: 9/9/2011 9:19:00 AM
wow hard to do..those roses are not easy to grow ;) good luck in the contest Taz thanks for stopping by my works! light &love
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Date: 9/8/2011 10:06:00 PM
wow, Richard, DEEP one. Good one!! One of the best in the contest.
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Date: 9/8/2011 12:21:00 PM
enjoyed your work....hope you are well....Thanks for your kind comments! You brightened my day!
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