Valsa George Poet Ode

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May- 16- 2025

Self Esteem Ode Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Crystol Woods

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Through the Eyes of my Son

My younger son is my best judge, I believe,
  Having spent more time with me, he can assess me better.
   His random statements about my personality,
    I believe are uttered with sincerity, not simply to please.

 To him, the outstanding qualities of his mother
  Are Compassion, Piety and a Yearning to improve.
   Others’ pain can easily move me to tears
    And am ready to alleviate their suffering as best as I can.

 Forgiveness and Compassion go hand in hand.
  Unless we are compassionate, we are not human.
   Unless we let go, we can never be peaceful and free.
    Unless we care, the fountain springs of life will go dry.

 Coming to piety, yes, I am. I believe nothing is possible
  Without God’s benevolence and I am rather strict,
   That the family is together for the evening prayers,
    For, I trust, it is through prayer, man is made fit.

 Every day I entreat God to fill us with love and piety,
  Which alone can keep all anxieties and fears at bay.
   When problems tumble down on us, one on another,
    With contrition, I address God in greater earnest.

 Learning and changing every day,  I strive to improve myself.
  Endeavour to do my best, though never perfect.
   With no inner debates and no lame excuses,
    I do my duty and try to hold my head high.

 Happy with my upbringing, I am thankful to my parents.
  Loving myself, I am on my way to better myself.
   Toiling hard to enhance the God given talents,
    I cook, clean, paint and keep my surroundings beautiful.

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Joe Maverick June 4, 2025 at 11:14 PM My comment shall be a prayer..Msy YHWEH tluplift you Vslsa..May He strengthen the others Around you and allow them to recieve sustenance from the prayers offered.' May you All plant seeds of faith in many places in Jesus Name.!)

Bj Legros Kelley May 17, 2025 at 2:54 PM Valsa, your son sees this is you, and how precious for him to encourage you in sharing with you that he notices these qualities deeply ingrained in your heart and life. You look to God for His strength and guidelines, keeping communications open between God, yourself and your family, a generational strength that you acquired from your own parents. It is beautiful that you are earnestly laying that firm foundation in your son. You are indeed a light of strength and very appreciated. <3

Sotto Poet May 16, 2025 at 8:46 AM Dear Valsa Such a lovely poem about self-reflection and personal progress. You evaluated your character from your son's point of view, emphasizing traits like compassion, piety, forgiveness, and a dedication to constant self-improvement. The poem emphasizes the value of love, prayer, and duty within the family unit. Sending you and your son many blessings.