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Through the Condensation


Arms raised, her charms rise
jet black mane cascades wetted
hour glass figure viewed
her curvaceous tanned skin fuels
she turns, that look, I'm in love




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M. L. Kiser

January 26, 2015 at 3:21 PM

Quite passionate and well done.

James Fraser

January 27, 2015 at 2:10 PM

Thank you MLK, hopefully soon I'll meet the condensation, James :)

Laura Breidenthal

January 25, 2015 at 4:34 AM

Fantastic verse here! It was a pleasure to read, and very fine imagery!Always, Laura

James Fraser

January 27, 2015 at 1:28 PM

Thank you kindly Laura, glad you liked this short piece, James :)

Sara Kendrick

January 21, 2015 at 3:33 PM

A winning smile no less..Great descriptive work..I enjoyed reading this one today..Sara

James Fraser

January 21, 2015 at 4:01 PM

A winning smile going back to my mind, just like other thoughts, soon left behind. Have a blessed evening Sara, James :)

Andrea Dietrich

January 21, 2015 at 2:13 PM

yes, this can make a man's heart turn to love!! (even a few women. heehee)

James Fraser

January 21, 2015 at 2:26 PM

Ha-ha, yes indeed, duh!! never thought about the role reversal. Have a blessed day Andrea, James :) x

Connie Marcum Wong

January 20, 2015 at 6:28 PM

A romantic gem this poem is, radiating the warmth of love! Beautiful James!#7

James Fraser

January 21, 2015 at 1:27 PM

Thanks kindly Connie, your comments always make me smile, James :)x

James Peranteau

January 20, 2015 at 5:06 PM

Hello my poetic friend and brother from another mother ! Missed ya dude ! Love the Tanka here ! Every word....not just every stanza....every word in this write leads the reader right(write) to your thought ! Awesome ! A pleasure reading you again....much love, james

James Fraser

January 21, 2015 at 1:15 PM

Hi James, long time no words. How's Noah, and I trust your both well? It's always a pleasure seeing you here, missed you also. I intend to stick around, so lets bump into each other - have a blessed day James :) :)

M. L. Kiser

January 20, 2015 at 1:37 PM

I can certainly, see that you are in love; an excellent depiction.

James Fraser

January 21, 2015 at 1:06 PM

Thank you kindly MLK, have a blessed day, James :) :)

David Meade

January 19, 2015 at 4:57 PM

Through the steam love rises!!!! 7

James Fraser

January 21, 2015 at 12:44 PM

My imagination is steaming up my mind David, thanks kindly for appreciating my poem, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

January 19, 2015 at 4:43 PM

oozzzzzzzzzzzzzing and steamy picture .. ---olive eloisa

James Fraser

January 21, 2015 at 12:41 PM

Ha-ha! indeed a steamy picture. I need to put such writes to the side and concentrate on some other topics. Spring is soon, then Summer, time to allow the seasons to speak. Thanks kindly for your visit Olive, always appreciated, James :)

Casarah Nance

January 19, 2015 at 4:42 PM

So very nice! :) :)

James Fraser

January 21, 2015 at 12:36 PM

Thank you Casarah, much appreciated, James :)

Jan Allison

January 19, 2015 at 4:11 PM

wow what awesome sensual imagery - a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

January 20, 2015 at 2:24 PM

I really need to have a conversation with my mind Jan, it's just not hot enough ;-) seriously, thank you so much for all your support - James :) hugs :) xx

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