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Through the Condensation

Arms raised, her charms rise
jet black mane cascades wetted
hour glass figure viewed
her curvaceous tanned skin fuels
she turns, that look, I'm in love




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Copyright © James Fraser | Year Posted 2015

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M. L. Kiser Date: 1/26/2015 3:21:00 PM Quite passionate and well done. Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 1/27/2015 2:10:00 PM Thank you MLK, hopefully soon I'll meet the condensation, James :)

Laura Breidenthal Date: 1/25/2015 4:34:00 AM Fantastic verse here! It was a pleasure to read, and very fine imagery!Always, Laura Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 1/27/2015 1:28:00 PM Thank you kindly Laura, glad you liked this short piece, James :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/21/2015 3:33:00 PM A winning smile no less..Great descriptive work..I enjoyed reading this one today..Sara Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 1/21/2015 4:01:00 PM A winning smile going back to my mind, just like other thoughts, soon left behind. Have a blessed evening Sara, James :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/21/2015 2:13:00 PM yes, this can make a man's heart turn to love!! (even a few women. heehee) Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 1/21/2015 2:26:00 PM Ha-ha, yes indeed, duh!! never thought about the role reversal. Have a blessed day Andrea, James :) x

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/20/2015 6:28:00 PM A romantic gem this poem is, radiating the warmth of love! Beautiful James!#7 Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 1/21/2015 1:27:00 PM Thanks kindly Connie, your comments always make me smile, James :)x

James Peranteau Date: 1/20/2015 5:06:00 PM Hello my poetic friend and brother from another mother ! Missed ya dude ! Love the Tanka here ! Every word....not just every stanza....every word in this write leads the reader right(write) to your thought ! Awesome ! A pleasure reading you again....much love, james Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 1/21/2015 1:15:00 PM Hi James, long time no words. How's Noah, and I trust your both well? It's always a pleasure seeing you here, missed you also. I intend to stick around, so lets bump into each other - have a blessed day James :) :)

M. L. Kiser Date: 1/20/2015 1:37:00 PM I can certainly, see that you are in love; an excellent depiction. Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 1/21/2015 1:06:00 PM Thank you kindly MLK, have a blessed day, James :) :)

David Meade Date: 1/19/2015 4:57:00 PM Through the steam love rises!!!! 7 Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 1/21/2015 12:44:00 PM My imagination is steaming up my mind David, thanks kindly for appreciating my poem, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 1/19/2015 4:43:00 PM oozzzzzzzzzzzzzing and steamy picture .. ---olive eloisa Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 1/21/2015 12:41:00 PM Ha-ha! indeed a steamy picture. I need to put such writes to the side and concentrate on some other topics. Spring is soon, then Summer, time to allow the seasons to speak. Thanks kindly for your visit Olive, always appreciated, James :)

Casarah Nance Date: 1/19/2015 4:42:00 PM So very nice! :) :) Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 1/21/2015 12:36:00 PM Thank you Casarah, much appreciated, James :)

Jan Allison Date: 1/19/2015 4:11:00 PM wow what awesome sensual imagery - a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply James Fraser Date: 1/20/2015 2:24:00 PM I really need to have a conversation with my mind Jan, it's just not hot enough ;-) seriously, thank you so much for all your support - James :) hugs :) xx