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Written for the glenn hughes contest. Sponsored by Robert James Liguori ..I came across this song; through it all, sung by glenn hughes and the device. And the music is perfect and lyrics too resonated with me so deeply and i was listening to it as i wrote this. Please do check it out; https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=m8D2TnJ7wHo&pp=ygUUR2xlbm4gaHVnaGVzIGx5cmljcyA%3D as i cant still figure out how to attach songs 

Thank you soupers for your kind support, iv been unwell still and slowly will get back to reverting back on those that showed love and support through comments. 
i appreciate your kindness.

 

To the lily moon that never forsakes me~ amidst the cruel constellations that left me stranded in a melancholic maze of rain-kissed memories. I’ll write this prose for you, on periwinkle paper perfumed with geranium grace, in rhyme-less cadence, like the rhythm of raspberry regrets flowing in hues of poisoned red~ through blue bruised veins screaming for begonia bliss, blooming amidst balmy bouquets of bewitching ballads. For I’ve been singing alone, knitting daffodil dreams across skies of colorless sunsets. Like an abandoned and forgotten flower, dancing to the tune of darkness, while dwelling in dreary drowsiness, unable to break free from the frost-clawed iciness. Yet, I remember when the soulless stars refused to orchestrate marigold melodies, you were the maestro in musical meadows, sowing herbs of harmony, to synchronize scentless symphonies. You carried me through it all, like a wingless angel, wrapping my somber silhouette with silver sonatas. And when I felt the porcelain petals scattered across softened sand beneath my frail feet~ pierce through honeyed skin like thistles and thorns, you gave me your heart, inked with carmine syllables of compassion, and watched me rise like the sangria sun, to adorn wilted willows with lilac-laced love and feathered forgiveness.. And when I come through it all~ I know your name will remain within amaranth auroras eternally twirling as teal ribbons~ for you are the charismatic chorus of clemency that I’ll forever replay on rewind. I’ve been a misplaced magnolia tree~ in a weathered field of misery, tangled in crumbling roots of rambling ruins, watching greenest of vines wane into wretched weeds. O’ beloved you will be remembered, you drew immortal roses from glistening tears of an undying crescent~ placed it on my acrylic canvas, to save me from the eclipsed spheres, when this heart longed for an eternal sleep in a glass casket of withered wisterias. And when I felt the porcelain petals scattered across softened sand beneath my frail feet~ pierce through honeyed skin like thistles and thorns, you gave me your heart, inked with carmine syllables of compassion, and watched me rise like the sangria sun, to adorn wilted willows with lilac-laced love and feathered forgiveness.. You are the one I’ll never forget~ as this poem I’ve written to the beloved moon; my timeless muse, glazed in twinkling temptations. And when I come through it all I pray I’m the one ~ you’ll never forget ..

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Date: 6/16/2024 6:32:00 PM
This is a poetic masterpiece. I wish I could have placed it higher but judging is very difficult sometimes. I look forward to your entry into the next Glenn Hughes contest!
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Date: 6/16/2024 8:54:00 AM
Dear Ink. I am glad to see this poem on the winners list . It is brimming with beautiful images. I will have to pay attention to how I got my video to show. I played around and finally found the place that lets you do it. It looks to me like that song really inspired you. Feel better soon, Dear, and congrats.
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Date: 6/10/2024 6:26:00 AM
IE, I see this as appreciation for help received when experiencing trauma. It's a very dramatic and thoughtful expression of pain and thanks for help rendered. We do hope to have an attachment to people who have helped us...especially when they disappear like an eclipsed star or planet. Kindness is something we won't forget for sure. I am sorry to hear you are ill. There's not any pressure to respond to any comment. Please just get better!!! We're thinking of you and sending you strength!!
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Date: 6/8/2024 10:33:00 PM
hi ink...what an expressive, fluent piece which tugs at the heartstrings...a pleasure reading you as I thank you for your wonderful comment on my page...till soon!
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Date: 6/8/2024 10:05:00 PM
This is a poem of artistic gifts. I liked the words "charismatic chorus of clemency that I'll forever replay on rewind". It is very romantic.
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Date: 6/8/2024 5:44:00 PM
Dear Empress, your amazing and wonderful poetic prowess leaves me utterly spellbound. This exquisite ode to the moon's comforting constancy makes me want to break out my guitar and sing. I believe this is simply breathtaking in so many wondrous ways.. for instance the way you intertwine floral motifs with raw emotions is ingenious and it makes it even more musical. I want to sing of your rhapsody to your timeless muse for I feel it is a transcendent tour de force. Empress, I do hope that you are doing better and healing. I'm in awe of your artistry. Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 6/8/2024 9:39:00 AM
I was going to write for this contest, but not had a chance.. I have an idea, just need to write it all down.. Even though you do not listen to this guy or had even heard of him before this contest, your poetic power can write on any subject and you have shown it here... there are many great lines, included good use of alliteration and meanings hidden behind metaphors... this is very romantic to me, like you are thanking your muse and your inspiration.. best of luck in the contest dear..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/16/2024 8:56:00 AM
You got your trophy poem into the contest right under the gun, Silent One, and it really paid off.
Date: 6/8/2024 8:38:00 AM
I’ll write this prose for you, on periwinkle paper… when this heart longed for an eternal sleep in a glass casket of withered wisterias...pretty imagery though this last one was sad…hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 6/8/2024 7:39:00 AM
Dear Ink, this is a superb poem about gratitude and reverence for the moon, which has soothed and inspired you in times of darkness and sorrow. The poem depicts their mental path through tough times and their reliance on the moon for hope and comfort. Lovers and poets have long been inspired by the moon. You describe feelings and events using vivid words. "Rain-kissed memories," "raspberry regrets," and "sangria sun" provide powerful imagery and emotion to the poetry. You employ also personification ("screaming for begonia bliss") and metaphor ("like a wingless angel") to enhance the poem's meaning. Best luck with the contest.
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Date: 6/8/2024 6:05:00 AM
This feels like a song and it's a beautiful one. You and Mr Moon sigh. A love affair for the ages. Your refrain is awesome and worthy of repeat. You've been sick? Soupmail
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Date: 6/8/2024 5:42:00 AM
You compose a fabulous poem with all the imagery, flow, alliteration and understanding. You certainly see the light of grand poetry.
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Date: 6/8/2024 5:23:00 AM
Oh damn! It felt like this piece romanced me. I want to be the moon right now Dear Ink. I read it out so loud and it flowed like the water running down my tap. I'm overwhelmed by this. "for you are the charismatic chorus of clemency that I’ll forever replay on rewind." The alliterations be giving king of formations. Hahaha. A fav for me. I love too many lines. The moon is a beautiful muse and she sits elegantly with a glass of champagne spewing rare thoughts to you. You write so well.
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/8/2024 6:06:00 AM
You're both so good. Glad you found each other
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Ink Empress
Date: 6/8/2024 5:43:00 AM
Awwn lets say you too are the moon. Haha thank you so much. Please do listen to the song i love it. Im hooked! Thank you for the fave too appreciate you beautiful soul
Date: 6/8/2024 4:27:00 AM
Interesting lines penned in this one. If for a contest, it should do well or so I think. Thank you for sharing it with us. Your visits to my page are encouraging. Sara K
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Date: 6/8/2024 2:53:00 AM
amidst the cruel constellations that left me stranded in a melancholic maze of rain-kissed memories... mmm .. the way this line hits!!! blue bruised veins begonia bliss, blooming amidst balmy bouquets of bewitching ballads… dwelling in dreary drowsiness, synchronize scentless symphonies. yesss come thru alliteration!! heart longed for an eternal sleep in a glass casket of withered wisterias. … porcelain petals scattered across softened sand beneath my frail feet my timeless muse, glazed in twinkling temptations. these lines hits sooo good .. effortlessly woven perfectly papi..
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Ink Empress
Date: 6/8/2024 3:29:00 AM
Papi u read it all? Haha thanks

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