Through Her Blue Eyes

As she wakes up, to get to school
She sees a girl in the foggy, glass mirror
Wet blonde hair, blue eyes, her dad’s nose, her mom’s features…
But in her mind she sees ugly, plain, average….

People tell her she’s gorgeous, stunning
But she declines the compliments
She gets on the scale
And sees the digits to high
And starts to cry

She assumes people judge her
From childhood mistakes
Her friends tell her she’s skinny
But they don’t see the blob forming
When she sits

She watches celebrities on TV
Skinny, toned, perfect
But none of them have a figure like her
She barley watches what’s on the screen
When she hears a voice
“ God, your so ugly!”
She ignores the voice and go finds her guy friends

They start to pick and criticize her,
But she doesn’t know how to stand up for herself

She tries to brush it off
But inside she’s ashamed 
The words of her guy friends keeps coming back
Like an annoying bug

She goes and finds her other friends,
The girls are judging and picking her apart 
Saying treacherous, unpleasant words
Feeling lousy, her confidence reaches such a negativity,
She starts to believe everything they’ve said to her
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Myers Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 7:47 PM
Wow.... well first thing i have to say about this is YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL!!! Sarah whats so wrong with average? Its unatural to be like the self starving ppl you see on TV. Guys can be brutal but i think its just because thats what guys do when they like a girl and dont know how to express it. Those (girl friends) are probably just jealous..... oh and Awesome expressive poem btw.
Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 12:51 PM
You are an awesome Spirit Being of magnificent worth truly loved of God...You have expressed yourself well one of the greatest gifts that you have been given as this Awesome Spirit Being..Sara
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