James Fraser Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Through Hemispheric Skies

I look down on earth
From my orbit high
Peering through the clouds
Hemispheric skies
I see paradise

Continents five
Oceans of blues
Countries of many
Will start anew

Flags will fly
Join as one
United

Freedom
Always

Peace

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Kabuteng P.Ink K. February 16, 2010 at 1:53 AM This is such a wonderful take on the challenge, James :) I particularly liked how you ended with the word "peace" I wish you all the best in the contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 12, 2010 at 7:36 PM EXCELLENT! a wonderful entry for the new contest.. poignant lines and great thoughts and title .. very engaging visual from wherever u view it.. thankxxx James.. for this "beauty"..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Hyle Chu February 12, 2010 at 4:36 PM We're too busy fighting amongst ourselves. Maybe one day, we will be united. Maybe when a new threat from the stars come.

Charmaine Chircop February 12, 2010 at 3:16 PM Freedom and peace..Is there anything better then these two factors..Wish you loads of them,James...Charma

Marty Owens February 11, 2010 at 6:51 PM Wow...beautiful Hexaverse....Enjoyed...Marty

Carrie Richards February 11, 2010 at 4:12 PM Indeed! Paradise it would be, ....if only it were possible....just imagine! ~ Well done, James, and best wishes in the contest~ Love, Carrie

Sara Kendrick February 11, 2010 at 4:08 PM Great thoughts and hopes for peace penned in this descriptive Diminished Hexaverse. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara