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Through Hemispheric Skies

I look down on earth
From my orbit high
Peering through the clouds
Hemispheric skies
I see paradise

Continents five
Oceans of blues
Countries of many
Will start anew

Flags will fly
Join as one
United

Freedom
Always

Peace

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/16/2010 1:53:00 AM

This is such a wonderful take on the challenge, James :) I particularly liked how you ended with the word "peace" I wish you all the best in the contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/12/2010 7:36:00 PM

EXCELLENT! a wonderful entry for the new contest.. poignant lines and great thoughts and title .. very engaging visual from wherever u view it.. thankxxx James.. for this "beauty"..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Hyle Chu

Date: 2/12/2010 4:36:00 PM

We're too busy fighting amongst ourselves. Maybe one day, we will be united. Maybe when a new threat from the stars come.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/12/2010 3:16:00 PM

Freedom and peace..Is there anything better then these two factors..Wish you loads of them,James...Charma

Marty Owens

Date: 2/11/2010 6:51:00 PM

Wow...beautiful Hexaverse....Enjoyed...Marty

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/11/2010 4:12:00 PM

Indeed! Paradise it would be, ....if only it were possible....just imagine! ~ Well done, James, and best wishes in the contest~ Love, Carrie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/11/2010 4:08:00 PM

Great thoughts and hopes for peace penned in this descriptive Diminished Hexaverse. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara