Through a Window

I see you through a window 
It's true you are my love
I stand outside as it begins to snow
From the heavens that are above

We shall lie there for eternity 
Together in eachothers arms 
Together is a certainty
We're fools for eachothers charms

Laughing as we talk
Listening to the earth
Hand in hand we walk
I love you, for what it's worth

It kills me to see you walk away
You and all your beauty
By your side is where I must stay 
I believe it is my duty

Your hair sparkles in the sun
Your eyes shine in the moon
For now I am done 
With this eternal tune

But gone is where I'll never be
Be there is what I must do
Yes, that is the job for me
To be there with you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/20/2010 12:33:00 PM
Many congrats on your wonderful piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 1/19/2010 7:38:00 PM
This is a wonderful piece, congrats on your well deserved feature. keep writing. Your poetry friend Adeleke
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Date: 1/19/2010 2:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your beautiful feature of the week, Cody, and thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Lainie
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Date: 1/18/2010 12:29:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 1/18/2010 3:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Cody. I hope you have many more. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/29/2009 2:45:00 PM
Such a charming write..polish this jewel up a wee bit...line 5) lie line 6 & 8) each others..capitalize all the "I's" or none of the "i's". The rhyme is grouped by a series of 4 lines groups with end rhyme on the 2nd & 4th lines. So your form is Rhyme or Quatrain. Please don't be discouraged it's SO good I want it to be FULLY appreciated. Best of Luck in the new Year.
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Date: 12/17/2009 6:51:00 PM
I love the passion in this write! You are a really great poet, and I hope you enjoy it here at the Soup! ~Jen~
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Date: 12/17/2009 12:19:00 PM
That was very nice. Great write. -Courtney-
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Date: 12/17/2009 9:43:00 AM
And I hope that commitment is to poetry too ... for anyone who pledges loyalty so pure is a friend I need, welcome to poetry soup, may always be inspired as you proceed.
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