Thresholds: Collaborative Double Sonnets

"THRESHOLDS" 
By Robert J. Lindley & Edlynn Nau

I. Plow Your Fields, With Love Of Nature In Mind

In darkness seek light, in pain seek relief
when weak seek might, strength lies in true belief.
When harvesting crops, thank the fertile ground
if you are faithful, let your trumpet sound.

Plow your fields, with love of Nature in mind
with love embrace all, forever be kind.
Cut deeply fertile soil, look for hope there
reject easy life, therein lies a snare.

Wisdom comes, to he that prays and then waits
bad the counsels, to tempt the darkest Fates.
Birds gaily feast on worms deep plows bring forth
coldest are winds blasting us from the North.

River never sleeps in its winding bed
Greedy men, choosing not to give instead.

Robert J. Lindley, 5-02-2016
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II. THE GIFT

When first light is born as a precious gift,
and within nature, reminds us how near. 
To this: Earth, beast, man, and all life we lift,
because any day above ground is dear.

Winter comes and life seems to disappear,
there's no hope in green or bloom to the vine.
Spring enters in joy wrapped boxes of cheer,
bringing her favors, though fragile and fine.  

Courage is gift to the sad and declined,
celebration and dance, to the budding.
Certain is the hope for those who have climbed, 
from the purge of the fire and flooding.

Then, each one decides to take or to give,
the ultimate gift, is give and forgive. 

By Edlynn Nau 
May, 03, 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/4/2016 10:05:00 AM
I am in awe of both of these Sonnets! You played well off of the original.
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 5/4/2016 2:54:00 PM
Thank you Rick! It was an interesting experiment and difficult task! Robert is a Sonnet Machine while I'm just cutting my teeth. We do have a possible other experiment with a true collaboration into one poem we MIGHT try. Hey, worst that can happen: I learn something about writing Sonnets before I try another genre? Thanks for giving our project a read!
Date: 5/4/2016 8:11:00 AM
"Courage is gift to the sad and declined, celebration and dance, to the budding. Certain is the hope for those who have climbed, from the purge of the fire and flooding." ^^ PURE GOLD...a7
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Date: 5/4/2016 3:03:00 PM
Ha ha ha! Are you allowed to be a fan of your own collaboration? I must say Robert, b/c of you, I will grow some. I will enjoy this genre, get intellectually satisfying tasks, and learn from you (the BEST: that we are each other's teachers)! Favorite: "Wisdom comes, to he that prays and then waits; bad the counsels to tempt the darkest Fates."
Date: 5/4/2016 8:09:00 AM
I want to thank my friend and wonderful poet , Edlynn Nau for the pleasure of collaborating and creating this fine poem. Such talent displayed in- THE GIFT and I could not have asked for better ending to this enjoyable collaborative effort.. Anytime my friend...
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Edlynn Nau
Date: 5/4/2016 3:08:00 PM
I want to thank you for spurring me on in your comments, support, WONDERFUL and thoughtful reviews! This was NO EASY task and was a challenge to how I'd take the paradox of this slice of life and give that. The most difficult challenge is that the last two lines goes to me to sum up both. Ugh! HARD! Nevertheless, it was interesting!
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