Threnody For My Father

I laid my aching heart upon your grave
that February day when trees were bare
of life; their withered leaves fell down to brave
the chill of winter death. With you they shared
the frozen veins and blood of lifeless ground.
And tears of icy rain helped to impart
the gloom, where stillness reigned, and not a sound
was heard, except the moaning of my heart.

Then April came on pussy-willow feet
to wake the trees with leaves and budding bloom,
while thawing ground gave birth in springtime-heat
to velvet grass which hid the ashen gloom.
Now stung to life by hope in April's rain,
the golden youth of earth shines bright and new.
And so I lay my heart with winter's pain
upon this renewed life that covers you.

I stand here in the shadow of death's sting.
Oh, Dad, I feel your pulsing spirit hand.
Come lead me to your green and hopeful spring
as it was- when you walked this earthen land.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Toney Avatar
May 4, 2025 at 5:43 PM
Sandra, thank you for supporting my Picture Prompt Poetry blog. Your poem is featured in my ‘Results’ blog, which is up and running. This is a precious tribute to your father. Thank you for sharing your heart.
Haight Avatar
May 5, 2025 at 7:01 AM
Thank you, Mark! I was pleased to enter this poem in your Picture Prompt Poetry blog, and so happy that, by chance, it was chosen! And, thank you for your kind comment. Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 8:31 PM
Wow ~ your first live is breathtaking and the rest of your poem is as moving with imagery and emotion. A FAVE for me.
Davey Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 2:30 PM
I believe that this write was the most heartfelt and personal in this contest. Beautifully written and a wonderful tribute, congratulations
Haight Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 5:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Brian, for your positive and supportive comment. It was a cathartic flow that helped to heal my broken heart. Sandra
Johnson Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 10:30 AM
Beautiful and meaningful. Congratulations!
Haight Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 5:01 PM
Thank you very much, MD, for reading my poem and for the lovely comment. Sandra
Kimathi Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 7:43 AM
Congrats Sandra, for your placement in the contest! ;-)
Haight Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 5:01 PM
Thank you so much, Teddy. Sandra
Roper Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win well done.. so very sad :) Hugs Eve ~`*
Haight Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 5:02 PM
Thank you, Eve. A very special poem to me. Hugs, Sandra
Kimathi Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 4:34 AM
Congrats Sandra, for your placement with these deep verses!!! ;-)
Richards Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 2:18 PM
Lovely to read this tribute again, Sandra. So moving and sad, but filled with love.:)
Shanmugam Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 11:04 PM
Touching poem..congrats sandra
Canerdy Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 8:48 PM
A 7 for this winning poem, Sandra--and a favorite! Janice
Haight Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 8:24 AM
Thank you very much, Janice, for your supportive comment, 7 and fav! Hugs, Sandra
Teagan Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 7:51 PM
Sandra this is a very touching and well-written poem! Congratulations on winning 2nd place in my contest!
Haight Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 8:23 AM
Thank you for offering a fine contest, Becca. I am so honored with my placement and it is so much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
A  Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 10:02 PM
Sandra, Congrats on your trashed #2 win. SKAT <3
Romaine Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 10:21 AM
Hey Sandra, a very hearty congratulations on your win this great contest! Such a wonderful and loving tribute to your Dad. Surely if there were more than one winner it would have placed. Excellent writing and expression. Be Blessed, Neva
Haight Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 2:14 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Neva, with your positive and supportive comments. It is much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
A. Sharma Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 3:07 AM
Congrats on a wonderful win Sandra!
Haight Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 2:13 AM
Hi Dr. Upma, thank you so much. I appreciate your visit and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Lindley Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 9:24 PM
Congrats on this fine poem placing. A truly awesome poem!
Haight Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 2:12 AM
Thank you, Robert. I appreciate your visits and supportive and positive comments and congrats. Sandra
Godwin Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 6:45 PM
I'm not going to cry, not going to cry, I don't want to cry. So beautiful and emotional, I don't want to cry ... This poem truly touched me. Congratulations ... CayCay
Haight Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 2:12 AM
Thank you so much, CayCay, and I am so pleased you felt the emotion of my sad and grieving heart. I appreciate your visits and supportive words. Hugs, Sandra
Y. Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 5:24 PM
Sandra, I'm glad you got placed for your amazing piece. Congratulations on your 1st place win:-)Alexis 7
Haight Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 2:09 AM
Thanks so much Alexis. I always appreciate your visits and support. Hugs, Sandra
Sietesantos Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 5:16 PM
Sandra, you are the real deal, my dear - a true poet as reflected in this awesome piece! Congratulations and a 7 on your well-deserved win! Pandita
Haight Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 2:08 AM
You are too sweet, Pandita. I so much appreciate your kind supportive comments and congrats. Thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 1:38 PM
yet another gem that got trashed - oh Sandra this brought a lump to my throat - a lovely tribute to your dad:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 3:24 PM
Hi Jan, thank you for the nice comment and congratulations. It makes me feel better that it made the winner's list in is memory. Hugs, Sandra
Guzzi Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 12:27 PM
Conrad's on your win, sad topic! Light & Love
Haight Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 3:24 PM
Hi Debbie, thank you for visiting my poem and for your congrats. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Richards Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 11:57 AM
This is beyond beautiful, Sandra, just so sad, but the most lovely tribute to your love, and relationship. Your Dad would be proud to have this in his honor. :) So honored to share this spot with you....(and this was trashed???....wow!!)
Haight Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 3:27 PM
Carrie, I appreciate your kind words and support. I am honored to share the spot with you too! This poem received an NA in the contest where only one winner was chosen. But I am happy it got a second chance to be on a winning list as a tribute to my dear father. Thank you! Hugs, Sandra
Kendrick Avatar
September 26, 2015 at 1:08 PM
This is a good one..I enjoyed reading it today..Reads like winning material work to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Pinet Avatar
September 26, 2015 at 12:05 PM
The emotions cling to this piece like a second skin taking the reader confidentially into your thoughts and the feelings of "eternal love" surface within the reading. Emile. #7
La France Avatar
September 26, 2015 at 11:35 AM
Sandra, this is so beautifully sad and moved me to tears. Oh yes you understand my father poem well, this is a grief we share, we go in rain, snow and beautiful days to weep our tears, thanks for visiting ...
Dietrich Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 9:32 PM
Gorgeous writing, the way you do your meter. SPOT ON, and the message is truly full of your emotion. Good luck in this contest that I have no idea how he is going to judge!!
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