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Threnody For My Father

I laid my aching heart upon your grave that February day when trees were bare of life; their withered leaves fell down to brave the chill of winter death. With you they shared the frozen veins and blood of lifeless ground. And tears of icy rain helped to impart the gloom, where stillness reigned, and not a sound was heard, except the moaning of my heart. Then April came on pussy-willow feet to wake the trees with leaves and budding bloom, while thawing ground gave birth in springtime-heat to velvet grass which hid the ashen gloom. Now stung to life by hope in April's rain, the golden youth of earth shines bright and new. And so I lay my heart with winter's pain upon this renewed life that covers you. I stand here in the shadow of death's sting. Oh, Dad, I feel your pulsing spirit hand. Come lead me to your green and hopeful spring as it was- when you walked this earthen land.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/15/2020 8:31:00 PM
Wow ~ your first live is breathtaking and the rest of your poem is as moving with imagery and emotion. A FAVE for me.
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Date: 10/22/2017 2:30:00 PM
I believe that this write was the most heartfelt and personal in this contest. Beautifully written and a wonderful tribute, congratulations
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/22/2017 5:00:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Brian, for your positive and supportive comment. It was a cathartic flow that helped to heal my broken heart. Sandra
Date: 10/22/2017 10:30:00 AM
Beautiful and meaningful. Congratulations!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/22/2017 5:01:00 PM
Thank you very much, MD, for reading my poem and for the lovely comment. Sandra
Date: 10/22/2017 7:43:00 AM
Congrats Sandra, for your placement in the contest! ;-)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/22/2017 5:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Teddy. Sandra
Date: 10/21/2017 6:48:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win well done.. so very sad :) Hugs Eve ~`*
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/22/2017 5:02:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. A very special poem to me. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/15/2016 4:34:00 AM
Congrats Sandra, for your placement with these deep verses!!! ;-)
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Date: 7/14/2016 2:18:00 PM
Lovely to read this tribute again, Sandra. So moving and sad, but filled with love.:)
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Date: 7/13/2016 11:04:00 PM
Touching poem..congrats sandra
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Date: 7/13/2016 8:48:00 PM
A 7 for this winning poem, Sandra--and a favorite! Janice
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/15/2016 8:24:00 AM
Thank you very much, Janice, for your supportive comment, 7 and fav! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 7/13/2016 7:51:00 PM
Sandra this is a very touching and well-written poem! Congratulations on winning 2nd place in my contest!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/15/2016 8:23:00 AM
Thank you for offering a fine contest, Becca. I am so honored with my placement and it is so much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/14/2015 10:02:00 PM
Sandra, Congrats on your trashed #2 win. SKAT <3
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Date: 10/12/2015 10:21:00 AM
Hey Sandra, a very hearty congratulations on your win this great contest! Such a wonderful and loving tribute to your Dad. Surely if there were more than one winner it would have placed. Excellent writing and expression. Be Blessed, Neva
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/13/2015 2:14:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by, Neva, with your positive and supportive comments. It is much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/12/2015 3:07:00 AM
Congrats on a wonderful win Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/13/2015 2:13:00 AM
Hi Dr. Upma, thank you so much. I appreciate your visit and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/11/2015 9:24:00 PM
Congrats on this fine poem placing. A truly awesome poem!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/13/2015 2:12:00 AM
Thank you, Robert. I appreciate your visits and supportive and positive comments and congrats. Sandra
Date: 10/11/2015 6:45:00 PM
I'm not going to cry, not going to cry, I don't want to cry. So beautiful and emotional, I don't want to cry ... This poem truly touched me. Congratulations ... CayCay
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/13/2015 2:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, CayCay, and I am so pleased you felt the emotion of my sad and grieving heart. I appreciate your visits and supportive words. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/11/2015 5:24:00 PM
Sandra, I'm glad you got placed for your amazing piece. Congratulations on your 1st place win:-)Alexis 7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/13/2015 2:09:00 AM
Thanks so much Alexis. I always appreciate your visits and support. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/11/2015 5:16:00 PM
Sandra, you are the real deal, my dear - a true poet as reflected in this awesome piece! Congratulations and a 7 on your well-deserved win! Pandita
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/13/2015 2:08:00 AM
You are too sweet, Pandita. I so much appreciate your kind supportive comments and congrats. Thank you so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/11/2015 1:38:00 PM
yet another gem that got trashed - oh Sandra this brought a lump to my throat - a lovely tribute to your dad:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/11/2015 3:24:00 PM
Hi Jan, thank you for the nice comment and congratulations. It makes me feel better that it made the winner's list in is memory. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/11/2015 12:27:00 PM
Conrad's on your win, sad topic! Light & Love
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/11/2015 3:24:00 PM
Hi Debbie, thank you for visiting my poem and for your congrats. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/11/2015 11:57:00 AM
This is beyond beautiful, Sandra, just so sad, but the most lovely tribute to your love, and relationship. Your Dad would be proud to have this in his honor. :) So honored to share this spot with you....(and this was trashed???....wow!!)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/11/2015 3:27:00 PM
Carrie, I appreciate your kind words and support. I am honored to share the spot with you too! This poem received an NA in the contest where only one winner was chosen. But I am happy it got a second chance to be on a winning list as a tribute to my dear father. Thank you! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/26/2015 1:08:00 PM
This is a good one..I enjoyed reading it today..Reads like winning material work to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/26/2015 12:05:00 PM
The emotions cling to this piece like a second skin taking the reader confidentially into your thoughts and the feelings of "eternal love" surface within the reading. Emile. #7
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Date: 9/26/2015 11:35:00 AM
Sandra, this is so beautifully sad and moved me to tears. Oh yes you understand my father poem well, this is a grief we share, we go in rain, snow and beautiful days to weep our tears, thanks for visiting ...
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Date: 9/25/2015 9:32:00 PM
Gorgeous writing, the way you do your meter. SPOT ON, and the message is truly full of your emotion. Good luck in this contest that I have no idea how he is going to judge!!
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Date: 9/25/2015 1:49:00 PM
Forgot to enter the rating :)
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