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Three Teeth

three incisor teeth burst through fresh flesh... opaque as pearls, strong as love, precious beautiful baby babbles assertively mesmerized by mishmash sounds that her astounding mouth can make prose poetry in its practice as canines erupt, she moans from the ache teeter-tottering restless to repress pain speedily advancing in substancial strength distracted by oblivious destructiveness a significant stepping stone approaches as a capable kindergarten adult she wiggles loose her first baby tooth receives a rich reward from a fantasy fairy more teeth disappear like pressed piano keys then return acutely out of tune braces displace awkward half grins an investment of finances and adolescence unstoppable with seducing sweets she sneaks cuddly candy under covers falling asleep with sugar plum dreams not counting a few costly cavities free-spirited, experimental teen meets Christina on the street samples compelling quartz crystal returns for seconds, as someone else disguised mesmerized by mishmash sounds that her astounding mouth can make speedily advancing in substancial strength she lucently levitates to a loftier place a magnificent mind babbles assertively sweeping the streets of pixie dust no need to eat or sleep like a firefly in heat, she dances frantically teeter-tottering restless to repress pain distracted by oblivious destructiveness she visualizes voices that vivify the way to the day's salacious survival guide prismic vision's shimmers no longer satisfy cotton candy granules' sweetness subsides coming down from kaleidoscopic clouds half-awake, she moans from the ache shrill shrieks portray poetry's unspoken pain death's drab projection is her heartless reflection hocking heirlooms to trade for a trancient thrill a despondent inhabitant of tragedy creepy crawlers invade every inch of skin her thin figure balances a skull's shadow irretreivable, ill-treated teeth crumble like the city's plundered storefront windows filthy, for granted, forlorn, fast-fading ...three feeble canine teeth remain 10-8-2023

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Date: 12/27/2023 6:08:00 AM
A sad and lonely path. Your poem is brilliantly crafted Juliet. :)
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Date: 10/9/2023 5:30:00 PM
A very unique piece. I am captivated. Addiction steals more than one’s teeth.
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 10/11/2023 8:54:00 PM
It sure does. Thanks for your visit.
Date: 10/9/2023 8:33:00 AM
Oh goodness this is heartbreaking poetry. From the promise and hope for a new life to the devastation of a life wasted on drugs. I once conducted a Bible study with a man who spent years on heroin. Addiction destroys but redemption is always possible
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 10/9/2023 3:02:00 PM
Thank you, brother Tom, for the encouragement. My sister's been a meth addict for 20 something years, so this looks hopeless, however we worship the God of miracles. I'd appreciate your prayers for her deliverance.
Date: 10/9/2023 3:45:00 AM
This is just amazing.... heart breaking and mind shaking, blowing me away, enchanting tales and woes, dreaded yet collecting hearts as they read. Love this so. God bless you, love, Gina
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 10/9/2023 7:46:00 AM
God bless you, Gina. I appreciate your kind comments.
Date: 10/9/2023 3:03:00 AM
This is stunning! So creative. I am in awe of your diction, and also the alliterations you’ve used here so seamlessly! And how you’ve conveyed so much so poetically! A profound write this is! You definitely are such a gifted poetess. I read this twice and was in awe , absorbing so much every time, as every line felt like a poem itself! Fave for me
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Tom Woody
Date: 10/9/2023 8:33:00 AM
Ugh! Didn't realize this was so close to home. So sorry
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 10/9/2023 7:43:00 AM
That means a lot to me. Thank you. Sadly, this is about my own sister. My mom told me she was going to have more teeth pulled, and I got to thinking how that alone is tragic. The horrific path she chose breaks my heart, even though I didn't like her when we were growing up.

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