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Three States of Aggregation

If water is life, death is ice, indeed. The frost does not call for a long walk, but it turns plain water into diamonds, though. Only a month ago, the lake had a staring contest with the sky and apparently, the lake blinked. You didn’t have the slightest chance, the lake: the eternal sky always outstares both you and me. How nice to hear diamonds crunch underfoot! I feel the frost is nipping my fingertips, but the sun is already warming. Soon our blue eyes, yours, beautiful and elongated, and mine, shortsighted and small, will stare up again. And then, when the time of this world will come to an end, we turn into steam and get back to the sky... There's something comforting about this thought, isn’t there, my dear lake? 15.04.2019 Intensity Poetry Contest Julia Ward

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Date: 4/17/2019 12:53:00 AM
The fabulousness of this poem has intrigued me; I have popped this onto my FAV list, Kurt.
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Date: 4/17/2019 7:34:00 AM
Thank you very much for FAV, Caren. By God, you are too kind to my poetry)
Date: 4/15/2019 5:34:00 PM
What an innovative creation you've spun here, Kurt! The lake ought to be honored. ~ Gershon
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Date: 4/16/2019 3:12:00 AM
Water is a good analogy to explain certain states of consciousness) Thank you, Wolf.

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