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Three Senryu

Senryu A year is a breath A trivial cosmic moment For me it is life Life is not a plateau But a stormy uphill struggle The upland is a dream He stopped dreaming In the middle of the night Death fell soft as rain.

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Date: 7/22/2017 12:41:00 PM
The super senryu - the third one resonated with me as an ex student 'stopped dreaming' recently ... he was just 20 years old:-( hugs Jan xx
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