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A non-contest poem.

 

I hold three magic rocks, in my hand Rolling them over and over and over Leaving this reality behind, far behind Rolling the first magic rock, a stage unfolds, Where secrets of magic are daringly told. With a flick of the wrist and a glint in the eye, A world of illusion begins to fly high. With the roll of second magic rock, a Genie takes flight, With a shimmer of stardust, a magical sight. "Three wishes, dear friend," the voice softly hums, In realms of the impossible, where fantasy comes. With the rolling of last magic rock, I dive into a magic divine, The healing embrace of a love that’s benign. In the heart of despair, where hope seems to wane, A whisper of faith can ease every pain.

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Date: 2/23/2025 8:47:00 PM
How I wish you had entered this poem in the contest. This sounds so plausible. The magic of love when enters the heart, all darkness vanishes. A beautifully constructed poem doing full justice to the lines of enquiry.
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Date: 2/19/2025 1:06:00 PM
- Magically and imaginatively written, Jay :) - hugs
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Date: 2/19/2025 9:46:00 AM
I really delighted in your fantasy rhyme of the 3-Rocks, magical and last stanza was my favorite, it was of a healing heart and touched me ever so. GL in contest, I see a top win!
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Date: 2/18/2025 3:57:00 PM
I liked how each rock had a different purpose, Jay
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/19/2025 1:09:00 PM
you are too kind. Just let your imagination go, Jay!
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Jay Narain
Date: 2/18/2025 4:08:00 PM
Thanks Andrea. This is not like your poem which is so captivating and full of poetic charm. I am learning. Hopefully one day I might write something like you.
Date: 2/18/2025 1:50:00 PM
What a creative write. It was so much fun to read. I also enjoyed writing about the rocks. Have a fun/blessed day as you write away..................
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