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A non-contest poem.

 

Three rock magical journey

I hold three magic rocks, in my hand 
Rolling them over and over and over 
Leaving this reality behind, far behind 

Rolling the first magic rock, a stage unfolds, 
Where secrets of magic are daringly told. 
With a flick of the wrist and a glint in the eye, 
A world of illusion begins to fly high. 

With the roll of second magic rock, a Genie takes flight, 
With a shimmer of stardust, a magical sight. 
"Three wishes, dear friend," the voice softly hums, 
In realms of the impossible, where fantasy comes. 

With the rolling of last magic rock, I dive into a magic divine, 
The healing embrace of a love that’s benign. 
In the heart of despair, where hope seems to wane, 
A whisper of faith can ease every pain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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George Avatar
February 23, 2025 at 8:47 PM
How I wish you had entered this poem in the contest. This sounds so plausible. The magic of love when enters the heart, all darkness vanishes. A beautifully constructed poem doing full justice to the lines of enquiry.
Andresen Avatar
February 19, 2025 at 1:06 PM
- Magically and imaginatively written, Jay :) - hugs
Anaya Avatar
February 19, 2025 at 9:46 AM
I really delighted in your fantasy rhyme of the 3-Rocks, magical and last stanza was my favorite, it was of a healing heart and touched me ever so. GL in contest, I see a top win!
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 3:57 PM
I liked how each rock had a different purpose, Jay
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2025 at 1:09 PM
you are too kind. Just let your imagination go, Jay!
Narain Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 4:08 PM
Thanks Andrea. This is not like your poem which is so captivating and full of poetic charm. I am learning. Hopefully one day I might write something like you.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 1:50 PM
What a creative write. It was so much fun to read. I also enjoyed writing about the rocks. Have a fun/blessed day as you write away..................
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