Three Magic Rocks

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02/23/25

I hold three magic rocks in my hand rolling them over and over and over leaving reality behind, far behind. I will throw those one by one to fulfill three wishes and to use thrice too tactfully so that my wishes get honoured. throughout my life time. I know well, as I will throw one, one wish will be over. So my first wish will be to wish the most right wish, so that no scope to be left on wrong choice. Second wish will be to proceed being righteous. Throwing last rock, I will wish three magic rocks to get back.

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Ink Empress

Date: 2/25/2025 3:54:00 AM

Such a sweet and beautiful write on magical wishes and what you would use them for, love the flow of your lines in this especially the penultimate stanza! So good! Pleasure reading you today dear anisha, best wishes for the contest. Sending you light always

Beverly Read

Date: 2/23/2025 6:57:00 AM

I like this, and think the third wish is very smart. I will be thinking of what I would wish if I had three magic rocks.

Anisha Dutta
Date: 2/25/2025 12:21:00 AM

I know, I 'm smart.. Also I know my poem will not be appreciated by the sponsor. Any way I'm thankful to you for your appreciation.