Three Keys

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Janice Canerdy.


See the source image

I used to think, when I was very young
		and immature, how splendid it would be
		to know my entire future in detail.
		Then one night, in a dream, I held a key.

		I rushed and found the door that bore my name.
		Then just as I was poised to bring to light
		what was to be, God's hand reached down and claimed
		both key and door. They vanished from my sight.

			************************

		I longed to pen poetic gems and sought
		the key to waken genius in my mind.
		In dreams, a golden box and key appeared.
		A voice said, "What you need, in here you'll find."

		The missive then revealed was quite concise:
		"You dolt, true genius doesn't wait to be
		released from golden boxes by charmed hands.
		And, rest assured, there is no magic key."

			************************ 

		When I retired from teaching, I acquired
		a special key that lets me frequently
		into a lively world that needs me and
		expels my crisis of identity.

		Behind this plain white door the key unlocks,
		I take my place as counselor and friend,
		playmate and driver, referee and cook		
		for two grandkids it is my joy to tend.


Date: February 10, 2021
entered in the 3 poetry contest     NA
Sponsor: Anthony Biaanco


received NA in Brian Strand's All Yours (Feb 12) contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/13/2021 9:38:00 AM
wow, this was fantastic. I see NA. I have had ten NA's now in two or three weeks' time from him (I think only one win), and it's getting me very discouraged. But I will press on entering my poems, always hoping he will like it enough to place it! Truly, if I were the judge, I would have placed THIS one.
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/15/2021 9:19:00 AM
Thanks a million, Andrea! I needed to hear that! Janice
Date: 2/10/2021 3:38:00 PM
Hi Janice, You've penned a good take on the contest theme. I wasn't expecting your heartfelt and touching ending. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/10/2021 7:14:00 PM
Thanks so much, Alexis. Janice
Date: 2/10/2021 12:23:00 PM
Love the lessons you convey with this poem, Janice. Brilliantly done.
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/10/2021 7:11:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Date: 2/10/2021 11:12:00 AM
Love your take on the contest theme Janice. Good luck in the contest. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Login to Reply
Canerdy Avatar
Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/10/2021 7:11:00 PM
Thanks so much, Tom. Janice
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter