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I used to think, when I was very young and immature, how splendid it would be to know my entire future in detail. Then one night, in a dream, I held a key. I rushed and found the door that bore my name. Then just as I was poised to bring to light what was to be, God's hand reached down and claimed both key and door. They vanished from my sight. ************************ I longed to pen poetic gems and sought the key to waken genius in my mind. In dreams, a golden box and key appeared. A voice said, "What you need, in here you'll find." The missive then revealed was quite concise: "You dolt, true genius doesn't wait to be released from golden boxes by charmed hands. And, rest assured, there is no magic key." ************************ When I retired from teaching, I acquired a special key that lets me frequently into a lively world that needs me and expels my crisis of identity. Behind this plain white door the key unlocks, I take my place as counselor and friend, playmate and driver, referee and cook for two grandkids it is my joy to tend. Date: February 10, 2021 entered in the 3 poetry contest NA Sponsor: Anthony Biaanco received NA in Brian Strand's All Yours (Feb 12) contest

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Date: 2/13/2021 9:38:00 AM
wow, this was fantastic. I see NA. I have had ten NA's now in two or three weeks' time from him (I think only one win), and it's getting me very discouraged. But I will press on entering my poems, always hoping he will like it enough to place it! Truly, if I were the judge, I would have placed THIS one.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/15/2021 9:19:00 AM
Thanks a million, Andrea! I needed to hear that! Janice
Date: 2/10/2021 3:38:00 PM
Hi Janice, You've penned a good take on the contest theme. I wasn't expecting your heartfelt and touching ending. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/10/2021 7:14:00 PM
Thanks so much, Alexis. Janice
Date: 2/10/2021 12:23:00 PM
Love the lessons you convey with this poem, Janice. Brilliantly done.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/10/2021 7:11:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Date: 2/10/2021 11:12:00 AM
Love your take on the contest theme Janice. Good luck in the contest. Hope your week is going well. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/10/2021 7:11:00 PM
Thanks so much, Tom. Janice

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