Three In One

THREE IN ONE Fortified towering walls surround persons running through and fro stature small and little feeble only a fig tree available for him yet, he ran too. Fast! climbing the tree with all his might just to have a glimpse of this wonderful man: our God- Jesus Christ.. who in thousand sunsets and thousand sunrises succeeded to win hearts and disciples... Walking upon seesaw waves He invited him Unafraid, He silence the raging storm He appease them calming the wandering spirit He embraces each one with light Engulfing beyond approach outlasting borders reproach His popularity a thousand years His million miles echo healing aches a soothing breeze resurrecting hope yet, some were threatened scared to be thundered as cornerstones He shook and changed mistaken fate and faith bender They took Him. Placed Him in trial Flicking hurt - Inflicting pain. Lashing jolts of torture down to the bone. Each bang of the axe nailing Him tight. So excruciating allowing helplessly stairs of His death. Lifted high after the third day. Blooming sun, welcomed His life back. As cloud carpet and choir of angels enthroned Him high. Leaving His Holy Spirit behind. His Holy Spirit present each daylight smile and nightfall frown waiting. waiting. waiting for us - people. Our God whose presence is present everywhere. Recognizable in the most natural flower. Bathing us strength through tornado of trials. Showering us honey warmth happy sunbeams. A seedling green leaf in a rocky dry mountain. The trembling notes folded within rhymes and psalms. The Father, The Son and The Holy Spirit in one. (c) Olive Eloisa 4:44pm July 30, 2014 CONTEST NAME: GOD SPONSOR: REGINA RIDDLE first place, to God be always the glory..:)
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August 6, 2014 at 10:18 PM
OLIVE,, A wonderful, poem to read. Congrats, on your win.... LINDA
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August 2, 2014 at 2:35 AM
"A seedling green leaf in a rocky dry mountain. The trembling notes folded within rhymes and psalms. The Father, The Sun and The Holy Spirit in one"...WOW, what an ending to a beautiful and elegantly written testament to your faith Olive...Many congrats - Tim
Lindley Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 7:40 AM
Very nice my friend. Big congrats!
Kendrick Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 7:26 AM
Way to go congrats on your winning work..Sara
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 2:04 AM
Congratulation Olive xx
Callus Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 6:29 PM
A 7 top rating for this wonderful write, Olive_eloi! Inspired and based on true faith. Very well and deeply expressed. Congratulations on a well deserved win! // paul ... (will a double donut do!)
Smith Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 3:29 PM
Congrats on the 1st place and the flowers...hugs Tim
Johnson Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 10:21 AM
This contest spawned some great writing and yours is numbered among the best. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Lawless Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 9:59 AM
Congrats Olive, nicely done.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 9:08 AM
Perfectly unique dear Olive ! U amaze wid ur splendid writes ! Huge congrats on top place win !
Allison Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 8:26 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx
Nance Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 7:15 AM
Wonderfully written Olive.. Hope you are doing well, :) xox hugs
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 10, 2014 at 1:35 AM
Thanks much Cassie..:)
Smith Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 7:06 AM
Such a beautiful message you have penned, dear Olive!...wishing you blessings of love and light my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 10:53 AM
Thank you so much sweet Arlene..:) been busy for awhile
Merritt Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 5:41 AM
I love it when my prayers are so profoundly answered ! You got first place, Olive ! Congrats !:)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 7:12 PM
Thanks so much Keith I appreciate your drop by again... :) Sorry I have been busy for awhile.. :(
Walker  Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 1:26 AM
Powerful Olive... Congratulations on your win in Riddle's GOD Contest. You number in my book... LVerlena
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 12:06 AM
Thank you so much VErlena. :) I appreciate your drop by.. :)
Merritt Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 5:05 PM
Olive, this, once again, is so heartfelt. I envy you your deep faith. I am praying that you in first place if you entered it in the contest ! Light and Joy - Keith
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 12:05 AM
Thank you Keith my friend.. :) I know your faith as sturdy as mine.. :)
Onclaud Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 12:21 PM
how deeply written, eloi.. is this for the God contest? I like how you used the Trinity to express your feelings.. malapit na August!.. huggs
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 6:19 PM
Oo nga po..:) am excited to come home.. Probably I'll meet you up @ third or fourth week of August..:) thanks Nette..:)
Duet Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 10:05 AM
Your heart is showing here Olive...hugs Tim
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 4:23 PM
Thank you so much Tim..:)hugs
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 9:11 AM
Amazing Inspirational Poem Olive good luck if this is for the contest. Hugs Jan xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 4:20 PM
Thank you so much sweet Jan..:) God bless you..:)
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