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Three In A Tub Nursery Rhyme

We ride the sea of blue, as the wind blew. Mounds of white grew, it is soap not glue. Have you meet the three men? Bill is a writer with a pen, John is with businessmen, Tom likes to watch TV in his playpen. Three men in a tub, plus one child in for a scrub. They belong to a club, the bath time dub-dub.

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Marikate Kingston

Date: 10/5/2024 10:04:00 PM

This poem made me giggle, especially the last line. What a cute one. SPLASH!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/6/2024 8:31:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my cute "Nursery Rhyme" write. It made you giggle???? That makes me very happy. Oh yes, SPLASH with fun in the tub. Hahaha!!! Hope you are OK... Have a great/fun day writing away........

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/20/2024 10:32:00 AM

How cute is this poem! I hope it gets a high placing as I find it clever and child like so all generations will thoroughly enjoy this poem, good luck dear friend - hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/21/2024 12:15:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed my cute "Nursery Rhyme" write. It was fun to bring to life. Writing this makes me feel like kid again. The contest just came out. This one did Not place. I hope the three sad men do not drown in the soupy bath tub. Hahaha!!! Hugs... Have a great/fun day writing away........

Valsa George

Date: 7/19/2024 1:08:00 AM

A very sweet nursery rhyme. Children will greatly love its rhythm. I am sure it is for Tom Woody's contest. All the Best dear Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2024 9:42:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for All the Best. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Nursery Rhyme" write. Yes, for Tom Woody's contest. Hope he will like it. It was so much fun to write. It made me feel like a kid again... Have a great/fun day writing away......................

Tonye George

Date: 7/17/2024 9:45:00 PM

I have never been into nursery rhymes but I'm beginning to enjoy it. lovely poem dear Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/18/2024 9:29:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my "Nursery Rhyme" write to be a lovely poem. Nursery Rhymes are so enjoyable to read at any age. Hope you will enjoy reading some. Have a great/fun day writing away...........

Terry Miller

Date: 7/17/2024 1:53:00 PM

Rub a Dub Dub, love it, GL in the contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/18/2024 9:26:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your GL in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my cute "Nursery Rhyme" write. It was fun to bring to life. Writing this makes me feel like kid again... Have a great/fun day writing away........

Valsa George

Date: 7/16/2024 9:15:00 PM

Funny and cute. Even at our age we still enjoy nursery rhymes as there is a child in each one of us. Enjoyed your rhyme.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2024 10:59:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my "Nursery Rhyme" write to be Funny and cute. Nursery Rhymes are so enjoyable to read at any age. Glad you enjoyed this one... Have a great/fun day writing away...........

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/13/2024 11:12:00 PM

What a charming nursery rhyme! Riding on the sea is such an exciting way to get clean. So enjoyable, Paula. Blessings. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/14/2024 1:15:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my "Nursery Rhyme" write to be a charming nursery rhyme/So enjoyable. Yes, what a great way for a child to get clean. Bath time can be fun time. It was fun to bring this one to life... Have a great/fun day writing away...........

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/12/2024 7:47:00 PM

Hilarious,, but so very cute. I like the Three Men's new look.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/13/2024 9:04:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my "Nursery Rhyme" write to be Hilarious,, but so very cute. Yes, the men needed a new look for 2024. I love to make my readers happy. I love to give out smiles. "Smile" Have a great/fun day writing away...........

Deb M

Date: 7/12/2024 12:46:00 PM

Paula that is the sweetest poem…so cute!! Debx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/13/2024 8:59:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my "Nursery Rhyme" write to be the sweetest poem…so cute. It was fun to write... Have a great/fun day writing away...........

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/12/2024 10:44:00 AM

Hello Paula, your poem is cute. Hugs / Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/13/2024 10:39:00 AM

Hello Paula, It is a fun read. yes it is a fun time to read a nursry rhyme at any age. Hugs. /Darlene/

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/12/2024 12:29:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my "Nursery Rhyme" write to be cute. It is a fun time to read a Nursery Rhyme at any age. Now feeling like a kid again. Hugs... Have a great/fun day writing away........

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/12/2024 9:14:00 AM

These recent days of our complex time, there's still need to read a nursery rhyme, special forces changes courses, Aloha Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/12/2024 12:25:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my cute "Nursery Rhyme" write. It is always a fun time to read a Nursery Rhyme at any age. This makes me feel like kid again... Have a great/fun day writing away........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/12/2024 9:05:00 AM

Three In A Tub Nursery Rhyme ~ Date Written: 7/12/2024