Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Three In A Tub Nursery Rhyme

We ride the sea of blue,
as the wind blew.
Mounds of white grew,
it is soap not glue.


Have you meet the three men?
Bill is a writer with a pen,
John is with businessmen,
Tom likes to watch TV in his playpen.


Three men in a tub,
plus one child in for a scrub.
They belong to a club,
the bath time dub-dub.

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Marikate Kingston October 5, 2024 at 10:04 PM This poem made me giggle, especially the last line. What a cute one. SPLASH! Paula Goldsmith October 6, 2024 at 8:31 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my cute "Nursery Rhyme" write. It made you giggle???? That makes me very happy. Oh yes, SPLASH with fun in the tub. Hahaha!!! Hope you are OK... Have a great/fun day writing away........

Jennifer Proxenos July 20, 2024 at 10:32 AM How cute is this poem! I hope it gets a high placing as I find it clever and child like so all generations will thoroughly enjoy this poem, good luck dear friend - hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Paula Goldsmith July 21, 2024 at 12:15 PM Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you enjoyed my cute "Nursery Rhyme" write. It was fun to bring to life. Writing this makes me feel like kid again. The contest just came out. This one did Not place. I hope the three sad men do not drown in the soupy bath tub. Hahaha!!! Hugs... Have a great/fun day writing away........

Valsa George July 19, 2024 at 1:08 AM A very sweet nursery rhyme. Children will greatly love its rhythm. I am sure it is for Tom Woody's contest. All the Best dear Paula. Paula Goldsmith July 19, 2024 at 9:42 AM Thanks for your note and for All the Best. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Nursery Rhyme" write. Yes, for Tom Woody's contest. Hope he will like it. It was so much fun to write. It made me feel like a kid again... Have a great/fun day writing away......................

Tonye George July 17, 2024 at 9:45 PM I have never been into nursery rhymes but I'm beginning to enjoy it. lovely poem dear Paula. Paula Goldsmith July 18, 2024 at 9:29 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you found my "Nursery Rhyme" write to be a lovely poem. Nursery Rhymes are so enjoyable to read at any age. Hope you will enjoy reading some. Have a great/fun day writing away...........

Terry Miller July 17, 2024 at 1:53 PM Rub a Dub Dub, love it, GL in the contest Paula Goldsmith July 18, 2024 at 9:26 AM Thanks for your note and for your GL in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my cute "Nursery Rhyme" write. It was fun to bring to life. Writing this makes me feel like kid again... Have a great/fun day writing away........

Valsa George July 16, 2024 at 9:15 PM Funny and cute. Even at our age we still enjoy nursery rhymes as there is a child in each one of us. Enjoyed your rhyme. Paula Goldsmith July 17, 2024 at 10:59 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you found my "Nursery Rhyme" write to be Funny and cute. Nursery Rhymes are so enjoyable to read at any age. Glad you enjoyed this one... Have a great/fun day writing away...........

Evelyn Judy Buehler July 13, 2024 at 11:12 PM What a charming nursery rhyme! Riding on the sea is such an exciting way to get clean. So enjoyable, Paula. Blessings. :) Paula Goldsmith July 14, 2024 at 1:15 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you found my "Nursery Rhyme" write to be a charming nursery rhyme/So enjoyable. Yes, what a great way for a child to get clean. Bath time can be fun time. It was fun to bring this one to life... Have a great/fun day writing away...........

Hilda Greenhough July 12, 2024 at 7:47 PM Hilarious,, but so very cute. I like the Three Men's new look. Paula Goldsmith July 13, 2024 at 9:04 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you found my "Nursery Rhyme" write to be Hilarious,, but so very cute. Yes, the men needed a new look for 2024. I love to make my readers happy. I love to give out smiles. "Smile" Have a great/fun day writing away...........

Deb M July 12, 2024 at 12:46 PM Paula that is the sweetest poem…so cute!! Debx Paula Goldsmith July 13, 2024 at 8:59 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you found my "Nursery Rhyme" write to be the sweetest poem…so cute. It was fun to write... Have a great/fun day writing away...........

Darlene De Beaulieu July 12, 2024 at 10:44 AM Hello Paula, your poem is cute. Hugs / Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu July 13, 2024 at 10:39 AM Hello Paula, It is a fun read. yes it is a fun time to read a nursry rhyme at any age. Hugs. /Darlene/ Paula Goldsmith July 12, 2024 at 12:29 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you found my "Nursery Rhyme" write to be cute. It is a fun time to read a Nursery Rhyme at any age. Now feeling like a kid again. Hugs... Have a great/fun day writing away........

William Kelii Kekaula July 12, 2024 at 9:14 AM These recent days of our complex time, there's still need to read a nursery rhyme, special forces changes courses, Aloha Paula Paula Goldsmith July 12, 2024 at 12:25 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my cute "Nursery Rhyme" write. It is always a fun time to read a Nursery Rhyme at any age. This makes me feel like kid again... Have a great/fun day writing away........

Paula Goldsmith July 12, 2024 at 9:05 AM Three In A Tub Nursery Rhyme ~ Date Written: 7/12/2024