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Three Di-Mentional Firefly In Hcc

A thousand fireflies,
light up the night with torches.
World getting brighter.

Torch
firefly
holds light high
brightens night sky
lit

Phosphorescent light
coming from male abdomen.
Invites passionate glowworms.
Wingless female blinks,
hoping to attract nice male.
Will soon be a thousand more.



Note: Haiku...Cinquain...Choka   voila   HCC

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/12/2009 10:05:00 AM
Excellent imagery in a beautiful form. GM
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Date: 11/9/2009 3:41:00 PM
don't complicate it with names. when you can just call it poetry. jhl
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Date: 11/9/2009 12:50:00 PM
very creative! Light & Love
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Date: 11/8/2009 4:32:00 PM
I love the nature theme fireflies are cool. Thanks for reading my poem home
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Date: 11/8/2009 12:09:00 AM
strong write and truely original that ses alot about your writting great job
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Date: 11/7/2009 5:02:00 AM
a lot of artistic fun! Marty! really enjoyed the movement the entirety created! and thanks for your kind comments! jim
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Date: 11/6/2009 3:05:00 PM
Bravo--Charma
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Date: 11/6/2009 8:20:00 AM
This is amazing....what a wonderful combination of poetry!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 11/6/2009 2:56:00 AM
Awesome write on so many levels, Marty. Pure genius! Love, Carolyn
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