Three Birds On a Ticket - Ok, I'Ll Pick It

Three Birds on the Ticket?  Ok, I'll Pick It.

In 1776, a decision was made as to which bird would be the symbol of America's beginning.  If the choice had been mine, this would have been the result...

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First there is a TURKEY, entered as a bird of choice,
but thinking of the ludicrous sound of his gobbles,
I could not choose this one because of its silly voice.
The head of this fowl should be on a toy that bobbles.

I must agree that the EAGLE is quite an elegant creature.
This hunter's fierce eyes make him appear quite ferocious,
But because of his baldness and other distinctive features,
a bird of prey for a national bird is nothing short of atrocious.

I've decided that my vote goes to a bird known for peace. 
Noah hopefully sent one out from the Ark, a white DOVE.
A symbol of hope that all warring should desist and cease.
Shouldn't a national bird also be a symbol of peace and love?

A dove should never be considered as weak.
Do not under estimate the bird or his worth.
It's a sign of strength to be humble and meek.
God said, "The meek shall inherit the Earth."

1776: The Eagle, the Dove, or the Turkey contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/17/2015 10:52:00 PM
Love your poem :) congratulations on your win!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/18/2015 12:55:00 AM
Thank you very much, Eve, and thank you for your generous placement of me in your contest. It was fun to participate.
Date: 11/11/2015 7:34:00 PM
Well written, Lin. Congratulations on this winner.
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/11/2015 7:37:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Dan.
Date: 11/11/2015 7:23:00 PM
Congratulations for this very well thought-out piece, Lin
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/11/2015 7:36:00 PM
Thank you, Jerry.
Date: 11/11/2015 9:28:00 AM
congrats Lin ... well done...
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/11/2015 5:10:00 PM
Thanks, John.
Date: 11/11/2015 7:42:00 AM
Love the way you addressed the theme, Lin! Congratulations on being on this short list of winners with your HM win! Hugs, Sandra
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/11/2015 8:33:00 AM
Thanks, Sandra. Fun writes make me smile.
Date: 11/10/2015 11:29:00 PM
Lin a well deserved to me win!!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/11/2015 3:53:00 AM
Thank you, Michael.
Date: 11/10/2015 11:02:00 PM
Congrats
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/11/2015 3:53:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 10/28/2015 7:48:00 AM
Lin, I love the display of the strengths and weaknesses of some birds... =`) love your wordage with depth!!! ~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/28/2015 8:17:00 AM
Thank you, Olive. With all due respect to Franklin and Adams, I had to agree with Jefferson .
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