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Fluid Impressions: Watercolor Paintings of Human Thought Stock ...

looking through mind’s eye
as if in a trance 
perhaps due to circumstance
or perchance the last dance

then again on the fly
without condescending
blending all elements in sight
I start to cry

wolf wolf the fear has arrived
disguised but still here
feel the fear

blowing in the winds of fate unknowing
death seeks to end the lie
just die bye bye die

then come again with reason
in another season
to veer out of last dance trance
to fly again in the universal wind

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Date: 8/18/2025 5:12:00 PM
even though your thoughts are running free, I found them captivating...waiting for part 2... hugs
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Date: 8/18/2025 5:00:00 PM
now you've done it Bill, you opened the door....can't wait for Thoughts Running Free 2
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