Bill Baker Poet Free verse

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Thoughts Running Free 1

looking through mind’s eye
as if in a trance 
perhaps due to circumstance
or perchance the last dance

then again on the fly
without condescending
blending all elements in sight
I start to cry

wolf wolf the fear has arrived
disguised but still here
feel the fear

blowing in the winds of fate unknowing
death seeks to end the lie
just die bye bye die

then come again with reason
in another season
to veer out of last dance trance
to fly again in the universal wind

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh August 19, 2025 at 1:24 AM Uncontrollable flow of thoughts, interesting and thought provoking write Bill Baker August 19, 2025 at 6:53 AM Thanks for the comment, Akham. Just let people see what's running through my minds these days. Have a great week! Bill

sara Etgen-Baker August 18, 2025 at 5:12 PM even though your thoughts are running free, I found them captivating...waiting for part 2... hugs Bill Baker August 18, 2025 at 8:52 PM See you tomorrow then. :-) Hugs, Bill

John Lawless August 18, 2025 at 5:00 PM now you've done it Bill, you opened the door....can't wait for Thoughts Running Free 2 Bill Baker August 18, 2025 at 8:50 PM I'm going to do 5 of these, today through Friday. A lot of thoughts just keep running through my mind, so I'll write some of them down each day. Thanks for the visits and comments, my friend. Bill