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Thoughts On a Summer Evening

A summer evening in the asphalt homeland One more dance one more sigh the park is growing dark now The benches are fille with the resplendent energy of youth A grey haired man walks near the entrance Cars pass by on the avenue The streetlamps will soon start to glow Some songs are yet to be sung

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/17/2011 10:09:00 PM
Very interesting image brought forth. Loved it.
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Date: 7/15/2011 5:45:00 PM
Thank you for inviting us in your thought process and the image you created is well presented. Thanks for sharing. Love and blessings, Caroline.
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Date: 7/11/2011 1:05:00 PM
Matthew this one is going into my favorites. i really enjoyed it.
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Date: 7/10/2011 1:41:00 PM
Enjoyed the down to "asphalt manner" of this write Matthew, your piece convey's soul and reality's nonchalance within its reflective lines..
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Date: 7/9/2011 8:03:00 PM
beautiful thoughts penned in this piece Matthew... a treasured read luv..
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Date: 7/9/2011 3:13:00 PM
I like the images...very nice ( a couple of typos if this is for a contest.) BG
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