Thoughts On a Summer Evening

A summer evening 
in the asphalt homeland
     One more dance 
one more sigh 
    the park is growing dark now 
          The benches are 
       fille with the resplendent energy 
                  of youth 
 A grey haired man walks near the entrance 
      Cars pass by on the avenue 
     The streetlamps will
     soon start to glow 
     Some songs are yet to be sung
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Eastman Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 10:09 PM
Very interesting image brought forth. Loved it.
Delacroix Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 5:45 PM
Thank you for inviting us in your thought process and the image you created is well presented. Thanks for sharing. Love and blessings, Caroline.
Foulk Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 1:05 PM
Matthew this one is going into my favorites. i really enjoyed it.
Maverick Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 1:41 PM
Enjoyed the down to "asphalt manner" of this write Matthew, your piece convey's soul and reality's nonchalance within its reflective lines..
Sweetheart Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 8:03 PM
beautiful thoughts penned in this piece Matthew... a treasured read luv..
Gorelick Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 3:13 PM
I like the images...very nice ( a couple of typos if this is for a contest.) BG
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